Wow, i had somthin really good written up for both of you, then i accidently pressed refresh...but ill try to remeber what I said...


Coke- Your topic and imagery was very good, but some of the lines were stretched just a lil at times. The structure couldve used some editing and been a little better also the vocab too but other than that overall it was very good.

Write-I liked your topic a lot. And idk i guess the better structure a topical has, the better it looks but idk cause im new here, so correct me if im wrong. Your imagery was very good although I couldnt follow it until the end when it all made sense.

2 good topicals...but ill vote WRITE on this one.

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