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Old 04-10-03, 11:12 AM   #1
Bloomquist
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Talking Strong Lovin' Feelings

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Hey this is my first Drop on here so be honest and tell me what i need to improve on...PAYCE...


You're like the flame on my candle,
without it im weak.
As Frost said "Take The Road Less Traveled",
Im going with you on that road of Love.

Do i A)Love You?
Or B)Love You Alot?
Whenever i see you my eyes get watery and hot.

Im going to love you like 2pac "Until The End Of Time"
But our love is too strong to be explained in a rhyme.
Whenever i say "hi" it seems like ure gonna die,
I rather get shot in the gut, then see my one and only cry.

Our Love...
Forever...
You and Me...
It's Always Gonna Be...
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