hmmmm chec it


rise- nice flow and wordplay feelin that,punches was nice hit hard al of that



quote-He's like the waiter at starbucks thats not clumsy,he'll never drop anything-hot::
So nothing "killer" will ever go into his CPU, even if he got his pentium-shot::

^ nice




street- not bad at all u had the flow and wordplay just lacced in punches but its all good u will pic it up with pratice




quote-I could put you inna hot-air-balloon n you still wudn't 'RISE'//
You're like a barney 'suit'...'hard' on tha outside n soft inside//


^^ nice concept just neededto be worded different but still pretty good