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Old 05-07-03, 08:49 PM   #1
Bloomquist
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For the love of the mic

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Makin these lyrics in open doors/
expressin my feelings with similies and metaphors/
might not seem like a poem, but is a bird a dove?/
aint got a girl, so rap is what i love/
wish i had someone to love me,someone to care, and take hold of me/
Grew up blind in darkness but rap let me see/

Horrible memories of shootings and death/
The devil breathing down my back, evil in his breath/
Didn't have anything, cept an un-paid bill/
crazy headaches but couldnt afford advil/
Gonna grow up,hopefully meet someone and get a wife/
I do this for the love of the mic, This is a story of my life/

Hey made this up plz be honest and tell me what i need to improve on. And YES it is a poem, even if it isn't about love.Thx yall peace out.
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