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"Suicide"

He Stood upon a Wobbling Bridge Rail
The Weather Grows bad and it Begins to Hail
Friends call To him from Safe, solid Ground
He just Blankly and Coldly Glances Around.
The wind starts to blow and the bridge begins to sway
Life Just hasn't gone his way
He hears the sobs and Whines from close friends
Whom he promised he would be there for, untill the end
He slowly put his arms out before him
His Black, Dark, Empty mind begins to suddenly spin
People stood and watched, they wondered why?...
He had Always been so nice..So Quiet..So shy...
The thunder rolled with a loud, piercing boom
He closed his eyes and pictured his newly made tomb
His shirt whipped in the Violent wind
All the Problems he could not mend.
What it is he Really cannot tell
He just leaned forward, Let his body go, and fell
Falling down, Down with a loud ear piercing scream
He fell From the rusty, old bridge Beam
He finally hit the Rushing water below...
His problem, No one ever know
Friends and family opened there Eyes
And realised that there Friend Commited...Suicide

I wrote a Part two as well...Lemme know what Ya'll think

PeAce