Tell me what you think of this one...It's one of my older poems...any comments on it are welcome...

"The Wreck"

We went out on a rainy, Friday Night
Thinking everything would be alright
We went in His father's car
And we really didn't go all that far
I raised my head from looking down
But I couldn't make a sound
When I saw the headlights in our lane
I put my hand on the dash and screamed his name
I closed my eyes and held on tight
For I didn't know if this would be my last night
All I heard was the sound of busting glass
Then the car had stopped at last
When I opened my eyes I glanced around
I found myself laying on the ground
I see something not far away
I think, Why doesn't he look my way?
I hear the cop sirens and see the lights
They pierce through the thick black of night
I feel the Polices cold hands touch me
I feel him, But his face I cannot see
He asked me if I felt any pain
I replied with a "no", thought I thought my life would drain
I glanced at the person, just lying there
I shivered at the thought, and the cold air
Slowly I closed my heavy eyes
Wishing I could run away and hide
When I opened my eyes once again
I knew right away where I had been
I looked at the doctor in an original way
Knowing that I would be okay
I was just fine untill a horrible thought
I started to wonder Where you may have been brought
I asked the doctor and couldn't believe what he said
He looked at me, took my hand, and replied "hes Dead"...

Copywright of Samantha Jones
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