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Old 06-04-03, 09:08 PM   #1
Split.
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From: Denver, Colorado
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this was a freestyle i did in "freestyle Cypher"
was just wondering if it is worthy of audio or not...
if it sux tell me tho



yo, i lyrically spit clips while im up in the cypher
yo pass me the weed, dont bother with the lighter
cause when i'm spittin.... i spittin fire.
im your simplist desire embodied in words
wrote yer name in the inscription of larzac, cause its what u deserve
watch as my verbs bullets curve and swerve seekin out yer nerves.
you think its absurd how a kid from the 'burbs
with lyrics only, verbals lonely, could have your intentions curbed
thats the power of the learned
when my face stern, people discern thier is cause for concern
that ima have the whole world "upside-down-turned"
im buryin bodies in forests of fern
i bring my tongue with me to get the body to burn
cause like i said earlier, my words are a flame-inducing germ

Last edited by SplitSouL : 06-04-03 at 09:15 PM.
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