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Old 06-12-03, 03:04 PM   #1
sthash
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read dis , any thoughts or examples on how i cud improve it

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i pull a gun to your head making you nervous//
snatching up purses//
an kill you even though we were faking the murders//
you need to cursed from these verses while i disburst this, like manz at macy dz happily jacking a jerk in costumers burgers//
wit the skill and speed to kill a thieve//
cut him so fast the scab will heal and seev//
b4 the skin starts to even bleed//
im the illest breed and an obscene~burdon//
murderscene, of bodies bein severd clean//
after the police have reported a miss-eenng~person//
im like a clean vermin,react like erik sermon//
while humping and obseece german//
and each person will see my peak surging//
as i speak deep and keep murking theese geeks perment//
i come wit tight skill, jezebelz , sketz get left
wit da pussy wet and an overnight pill//(sket=hoe)
sometimes bredas wonder bout my mic skillz//
blud it aint hard infact its easy like white gals//
piss me off and i might do the kind of shit dat
aint right to//
like swithing ya testicalz 4 ya eyeballls//
battling me is suicidal//
like bugee jumping when the rope aint even tied to//
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