i use ta be ritaculed for my preferance of music/
sit alone at home an constantly get lost in it/
was haven a hard time written appropriate/
nobody thought it was quite adequate/
I'm taken my time on this rhyme...i'm payin attention/
i'll try an write summin for you'z with a lil suspension/
wen you read it it'll leave you wit a sence of self-approbation/
droppin spits hopefully now dat are extraodinary/
i'm tryin wut u people tell me so this may be a contrary/
This better be a good drop wit vocabulary/
If you actually listen to some negitivity/
it helps you get past that simplicity/
Thanks everybody made me do something differently/
usually i write about life an why mine is unique/
critique everything now before i speak/
you ever felt down or weak? waitin tobe demolished/
went hard even though u wasnt good u didnt let'em be vanished/
If you were in my position an nobody liked you spittin/
wud you juz give up an say your quitin?/
or would you stop half steppin, strive to keep on progressing/
for everything you were longing for was downreaching/
wud you go wonna stop breathing an meet the devil/
anatomized my lyrical tendicies u made me stronger/
the adjective was for them to get better/
uncommen structure willing it maybe pecuiler/
a peice that cats may think is more proper..../

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461