This is a rather short poem..its one of my first ever written...tell me what you think please...

I take your gantle, warm hand in mine
And know it will only be a matter of time
You pull me up to you, So very close
I knew that your the one I wanted most
You wrapped your arms around my waist
I couldn't wait for that one, delicate taste
I put one hand on the side of your handsome face
You let me know I could never be replaced
I knew you were gonna kiss me, I wanted you to
All I wanted at that passionate moment, Was you
I closed my gray-eyes, and licked my warm lips
You slid you hands down, onto my hips
We placed our bodies against one another
You became so close to me, I thought I would smother
Then, suddenly you let out a nasty, Evil hiss
I screamed and knew this would be my first and...Last Kiss