This is kinda simple and sort of short...But just tell me what you think please...

I lay low in my parked, Hidden car
I see the two of you, Not very far
You reach to her, giving her a passionate kiss
I never though our relationship would come to this
She returns the kiss and you both smile
Your eyes study her body for awhile
I look to see your unlocked car door
Then you begin frenching that nasty whore
The anger begins to rise inside of me
I think to myself "How can this be"?
Then I step out of my car, and slowly walk to your side
I shiver as I open the door and peer inside
With a nasty, Evil grin, I raise a knife and say "cheater cheater pumpkin eater"
Then I suddenly bring the knife down, Repediatly Stabbing my dirty reluctant cheater