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09-11-03, 10:57 AM | #1 | ||
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What is Life
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Hey guys, I think that this is probably my first TRUE poem, drop links, feedback, critiscism, and tell me what YOU think it's about, I'll PM you all with the actual answer, but I'm just curious as to see what you all think
What is life is the question I always ask Without you it's nothing to me, I wished I hoped, I dreamed for it to last Friends, was what we were always until My feeling shone true, for you, they'll always be there too Life is nothing without your sense of being Without knowing that emotions exchanged, they aren't in vein, love not wasted today Heart torn apart re-sealed from lovers past I promised I wouldn't hurt you, but you broke me Like I was glass, I'm mad, no depressed All these tears I shed, your the reason that I have wept Life is nothing without you to be their right beside me But you ignore me, destroy me, two words and it's like my entire life you just ignored me "We're not" is all it takes, and I forgot how I laid my head on you Even if it is no longer there, my emotions will show for you Cause I Love You
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