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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-15-03, 04:28 AM
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not too shabby, i liked this piece, it was simple yet kinda complicated, vocab was aiight, structure was aiight, average ryhme scheme, mad emotion felt but dont be tellin tha ladies u love em, puppy love is such a sweet little tennager sight lol...j/j...any way nice piece show it to ya girl shell go gaga if shes got any appreciation for poetry,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~
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