This is my first freestyle, giv me some feedback on what u think.

They call me ninja coz i am quick,
and slick,
and i don't giv a shit,
and when i'm on da mic,
i don't rhyme polite,
i don't ride a trike like snoop and x who ride da mic,
and rhymes are tight,
and are ready 2 fight,
all day and night,
so mans in da dark are shifty,
and mans are playing hard like 50,
so they can play da game,
and have da fame,