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Old 10-20-03, 02:49 PM   #1
Kredit
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Wrote this in 10-15 minutes in my Electronics class, because we had a little time off .. I thought of the first line, and the rest just came to me ..

Pull out the pen, position paper on the end and I. .
Possess punches that are a pain in the ass like enemas
Often found in cinemas,
Sent from hell, so it's seen it's sins I'm with. .
And arrogance,
Exposing a bigger mouth than kids from Aerosmith
I'm errorless,
Insaney wits, Shakespeare isn't comparable. .
It's terrible,
How my notes can simply rip apart a fucking stereo
But really though,
I constantly rebel against regular rhythm and rhyme. .
Ahead of my time,
The Bull of rap; always holding the Mic in its prime
Upholstering mine,
Deciding dreams and controlling my destiny. .
the rest should be,
Holding a ShopVac before starting a mess with me
Yet cleverly,
Click clack and constantly collapse on boys. .
and be destroyed,
Then show you my instant image like a Polaroid
The tolls enjoyed,
Self employed, I'm known to oversee the rest
Envict with zest,
Because my power runs in the family like incest
I'm the best,
Bastards say they're God, I'll go with sacreligion
My wrath envisions,
That saying clear of me is wiser than my aphorisms ....

Yeah, it was quick, but let me get some feedback anyway ..
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