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Old 11-08-03, 03:19 PM   #1
cameronj86
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From: Bermy
When the game is no longer fun

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Unspoken words said through facial expression, changing impressions
Love teaches many lessons, and my thoughts of you lessen
Forget "us", we're done, I thought you were the one
We played silly games, but games are s'pposed to be fun
Cannot base relationship off mixed signals and emotions
Thoughts coasting, around you I no longer feel open
Eyes unrelenting, yet from others you hide your intentions
Used 2 b consenting,now I ask is it me you want or just my attention?



First time here, just trying to see how my poetry is... any advice is welcome
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