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11-18-03, 09:40 PM | #1 | |
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forgotten (plz read)
IP:
(this is a little something i wrote a while back, i havent been on in a while so i can't really keep ya'll updated, i dont know how i feel about this piece definetly not up there with the #1's but, idk, let me know what yall think)
`````````````````````````````````````````````````` `` All eyes on me with no vision in sight Preoccupation -> the past time Life -> the fight All eyes on me with no image in view Understanding paints the picture But comprehension remains few ~Writing’s the window to the heart and key to the soul Recordings of the past, present, memories, secrets sold and untold ~I stand in the rain with my pad and pen Scribbling my thoughts on the pain that cease to end ~Drenched in irony~ ~The ink glides off the paper and onto the ground, erasing my means and my stature ~Staining the streets and some flowing in the gutter The burden of mother of the block grows stronger Tears get heavy, more intense they pour and sputter ~I glance down at my words, my life Loose the only refuge for my anger, my strife ~The sun creeps upon the horizon The rain dries and on the streets new pain rot’s in No escape I drop my pad and walk away With a new knowledge of being Forgotten All eyes on me with no vision in sight Preoccupation -> the past time Life -> the fight All eyes on me with no image in view Understanding paints the picture But comprehension remains few
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~.:Soft Focus:.~ {--Deacon (\_/~\_/) Content --} {-Calisto (\_/~\_/) .:Lady Sage:.-} {--Filed (\_/~\_/) Domain 9--} {-Thrust (\_/~\_/) Know1 (\_/~\_/) Emotion-} { --Rule (\_/~\_/) Mental God--} Poetry Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten Understanding Once Again "It requires wisdom to understand wisdom: the music is nothing if the audience is deaf." |
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