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Old 11-20-03, 06:27 PM   #1
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dear mom

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Dear mom
Sometimes I hate you
I even want u dead
Then last night you said you wanna bring your life to an end
How could u say that shit I am only 16
And you got your son crying in da back seat
I tryed to talk to you about what’s wrong
And you fucken blow up in my face
Telling me u wish I was gone
Saying how u hate being a mom
And I dot know where I went wrong
I think you need to relax because I do love you
Even after all the torture u put me through
I just don’t understand why you wanna bring your life to an end
I could say that too But I know I can make it through
Cuz I can always talk to you
But it is kinda hard when you push me away
And I am standing there looking at your grave


can i have some feedback please b/c this piece is very real for me
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