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An Illfated Pair
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Names? Biologically: Paul and Saul can mend the fervorness. .
& what's an epic without names - for all intensive purposes Youthful as any, both characters designed to be like Socrates While Webster himself couldn't do better defining mediocrity Paul's outgoing. . Generic preachers and teachers had liked him An incomplete profile without saying his features were striking Social accolades built him; friends provided a thunderous grievance The tell-tale battle as potential collides with underachievement That is, in education; now, as we enter the hallway to Hell The playing field is even - school: a place where Saul could excel Out-of-shape & acne-ridden. . A mind not pompous but astounding Confident; needless to say, Saul's still conscious of surroundings Another blasé teen scripture? Don't debate my kin, be patient. . Because I wouldn't have written this without greater implications A captor had entered now, and both boys' souls were pocketed The captor realized, minus geography, he'd captured polar opposites But with a clear mind, the captor left his endeavor spun & smothered Sadly, without his help, such a link would've never been discovered So he dissected mentalities. . Without help, he soothed their tension All the while laughing at more examples of self-induced depression Captor smirks, returning souls; Paul & Saul would yield a dependant plea Society was unmasked and laughing as he revealed his identity. . With joyless lives, Paul & Saul would rebound - with "true" hate, though The captor wins again, for the individuals had found a new scapegoat in Society I'll get links up soon - please, only real feedback.
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