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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
12-06-03, 01:58 PM
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liked the closer alot on this one kinda brought the whole piece together. the flow wa s decent a little rough for me to follow in certain areas the rhyme scheme was correct overall this was clean nice story tellin-1
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