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Old 12-18-03, 06:25 PM   #1
t-west
thatkidwest.com
 
Posts: 542
From: Toronto, ON
what am i doing wrong?

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Dis is my battle against theprophet777, i just want to noe what I am doing wrong, and why I am losing so badly in the poles

Full battle is here.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99337


[T-West picks up the mic]

yo, yo, yo
u aint no prophet, cuz no light shine on ya verse/
even I merked dat faggot named diverse/
nobody noes or care bout wat u spit/
cuz we kno ur mouth like kotex...EVERY SIZE FITS/
u ugly as shit, kinda nigga who dateless at the prom/
Postin fake pictures…on matchmaker.com/
Learn how 2 rap, all we see is blah blah/
U harder 2 understand than dat nigga named ja/
his name is wrong...theprophet777 ???/
more like the worst employee at 7-11/
cuz all u good 4 is servin kandy in slurpies/
U like Apu's twin brother sayin "Enjoy The Beef Jerky"/
Dis man said anyone under 300 posts isnt worthy of a vote/
but u got 300 in under a month...u on RB more than snoop dogg tokes/
dis battle is a joke, now prophet extinct like the t-rex/
cuz uz a worse rapper than OPRAH IN SPANDEX!!!/

[T-west drops the mic and walks away]



Can i jsut have sum suggestions or sumthin, i dun see wats so wrong with my verse and how these voters say he takes every category and how i didnt even put up a fight. I think i had sum witty punches in der.
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