1.The Exposure of the poser "mc phoenix"diss by paragone-phoenix
2.the stand-last poet
3.when the heart stops-thrust


please reply....n give me sum good feedback so i know wut to work on n wut i already got.

all i see is war damn.............

There is so much shit in the world...fights between nations/
by the time u know it we'll be extinct cuz of fights n hateration/
The USA finally caugth saddam/
But u know Bin laden still be droppin air plane bombs/
The world is terrorized by warfare everywhere/
When this is all over we gonna have an eternal inspection n repair/
I know families right now that cant have a christmas cuz they kid or father is sumwhere in pakistan/
Isnt that ironic that it seems that the govenment likes this "sport"...they the numba 1 fan/
we think we the numba 1 nation...no troubles...get that out ya mind cuz youll see its only begun/
jus like the streets theres gonna be other people that wana be #1/
war causes the most physical n emotional damage...scars burned in u 4 life/
so if this a democarcy, y wont the government critcally think this twice/





please give me sum feedback on this......sorry bout the length

hope yall felt this lil' flow

peace

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