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Fucking bitch, this love gyrate to fucking hate
Emancipate a time when none of ya’ll debate
My life and actions, its too late cos it stops soon im leaving the room
Getting my own crib n then I can consume
Beer and speed, and trip out on shrooms blasting tunes
Inhaling smoke n toke on my own fumes
If a chose, which I do so fuck you and the rest of the family too
2 and 2 equals 4, but I get five, why cos that’s my privilege to decide
I don’t cry I inflict n depict Im sailing my own ship
It aint freight its battle I tackle, which sets my mom to flip
But im fucking 23, don’t they see, shit, its up to me
I fell out the ‘yes sir’ tree and landed on ‘I be what I WANT to be’
Independent spree, lasting for eternity aint no use trying
Seen it all, shouting, slinging and fucking fake crying
People deciding a been fucking lying, but I aint hiding
The more they threaten the more anger I got thriving
Contriving countless ways to pay back, the fucked up days
Aint needin praise, but hey, I don’t need abuse I refuse
To listen sumthin missing this bitch is loosely obtuse
If she thinks my goose is cooked cos I keep it raw n untamed
Framed and detained in my own mind, I aint ashamed
I aint to blame, im jus not the son she was hoping for
I don’t adore, she asks for more, the fucking whore
My heads sore from the earache she make, can’t take much more
Heard it all before, pushing me away then askin why I stray
I tell em, “im my own man” and “I play how I wanna play”
The day is coming when ima leave, yes BELIEVE IT cos I live it MY way!.......

...Lot's and Lot's of Hate...LOL....I'm not a hateful guy...so...^^...not bad...HATE!!!!!!....^^

yo man that wasnt bad a part of it i thought it was headin to poetry but it was iight keep postin

yo
yeh i agree wiv last poetr lots of hate but that was gud
keep it goin

return faver>>>http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99921 appreciate it
sfe
peace out

aint none of it poetry...damn fool...you other catz thnx..pZ

as expected you have such a gift for channeling emotion to lyrics and living them in words this was very impressive.....
you your mailbox is full you have to clear it for me to pm you for collab

done.....any more feed...its all welcome...pZ

come on peeps...any more..aint had shit..lol......pZ

DAMN that was some hot shit, i like it, u have a way with words no one else does on this site, mad mad props, yo pm me for a collab. i got a good idea
*****ONE*****

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i like it, deep emotion, good rhyme, anger lead all the way through, shit was real hot, do what cha do

that was good I liked these lines inparticualarly though.........



Fucking bitch, this love gyrate to fucking hate
Emancipate a time when none of ya’ll debate
My life and actions, its too late cos it stops soon im leaving the room
Getting my own crib n then I can consume
Beer and speed, and trip out on shrooms blasting tunes
Inhaling smoke n toke on my own fumes
If a chose, which I do so fuck you and the rest of the family too

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I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !!

my site:http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi

thnx peeps....appeciated.......pZ

very emotive, an some nice immagery,
was a little poetic, but an impressive piece nether the less.

peace

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I thought it was okay. I have heard this subject lots of times before. Why is it that every emcee bitches about the same thing? Structure need work. Nice vocab though.