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Lyrical Soldiers? Let me put your jaws on a pause
You fightin' for your respect is a war without a cause
Implement laws, the boss gonna knock out ya teeth
Good thing you cross eyed... you only win when you cheat
Time freezes with you, so no need to spit bars soon
You'll never grow man enough to not watch cartoons
Your winnin streak's like a pedophile, you know it too
Cuz it only stays wit you when you're hanging with noobs
Now you must choose, who's gonna end up on top
Me or you, you sick freak... not you or your mom
And your only friend is the unemployed office, you lyer
How you gonna give out pink slips when you can't spit fire!

all of ya drops, nuttin but practical spits
where ya mugz mo uglier than jack"o' in kids!
rapture this bitch, leave his flow all wrong-ly!
sorry, Anna Nicole Smith the only 1 goin on E!
an don't lie, ya wack an your name is jus gayer
u droppin bombs is like bush at a talibans prayer!
fuck it, it's like everywhere they easily torn this guy!
but I can't blame them..he even has warnin sign!
your borderline, without a green card to victory!
0-3 odds, Let's see..LOSS is what I predicted, see

uuhh one sided battle

punches-can
flow-tie
wordplay-can
personals-can
opener-can
closer-can

overall-cannabars

...........write e's verse didnt really diss him

Vote:Cannabarz

I just felt that he had harder disses with a nicer flow!! The multis definatly went to Cannabarz which helped his flows, he had better punches!! I felt that Write E, had better personals (of what i thought were personals!) but Cannabarz had a better overall verse!!

Elevate^^^^

Yo, i just said mt peice but for got to show my links, if ya can return the favour:

MY BATTLES:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99268
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99573

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I can't poll vote....but personally I was feelin Write E's a little more....
Cannabarz had some nice lines but they were a little short for me....the bush/taliban...jacko 'n anna nicole lines were played in my eyes...they didn't have much of an effect....
Write E had some nice lines... good personals...nice closer.
The only bar that let it down was the 'On top of ya mom' line.... but other than that I'd...

Vote -Write E

Drop an honest vote on this battle if you got time man.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99923

gimme a link to whoever said that and I'll give you regards...but none my lines are EVER PLAYED...EVER..aiight..1-0 by poll.

Theres a link up there man..... ^ .................................................. ..................

Oh shit i get you.......sorry man......Yeah, I've seen them used in different contexts on a few sites really..... maybe not played as much.... more predictable to me personally....didn't make much of a punch.......

punches - can
flow - tie
wordplay - can
personals - can
opener - can
closer - can

vote - can

one sided really........

ive taken the time to hit ur battle up.....hit this up honestly plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...955#post1004955

thanks

laterz

thanx..2-0 me..due to polls...

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I really liked what this battle came out as. Cannabarz I think you should start battling in Elevated Front Lines cuz boi you got talent. Write E that's ok that's kinda what I expected of you in the first place. You are a noob and you did alright. Really though you wern't supposed to win this. No Hate take it as Constructive Critisism Dont' worry I'm the person who gave Cannabarz his first win he merked me easily. Take this as Constructive Critisism Write E this is no hate, In my opinion you easily have the potential to come back.
The Laydown:
Opening:Write E nice job it was a better opening in my opinion.
Punches: Cannabarz. You just couldn't hit hard enough Write E.
Personals:Cannnabarz. Write E didnt' seem to have many
Metaphors:Tied. Closest person to have a metaphor was Write E but it was a simili.
Vocabulary: Cannabarz
Multis:Tied
Structure:Cannabarz short but deadly.
Flow:Cannabarz I seemed to feel yours in this one.
Closing:Cannabarz nice job you performed well.
Overall:Cannabarz

Vote: Cannabarz (good job though Write E!)
If you guys could hit these battles up with an honest vote I'd really appreciate it. Thanx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100301

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100289