5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

no crew.......hate.......d/r.........fan club votes

if u are a herb please dont vote in this battle

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Wordplay?? if you ask that yourself..dont Vote

*starts Keyin to the beat from Little House on the Prairy*

E.Coli's just another Key in a Song I call.."The Merking Tune"..
..Beating me? be Real kid..jus like ya Avater, ya a Fake Cartoon
another Pac ridin Loon..coz he thinks Mutual love brings Respect
..Except..for the Fact that none of RB can Relate to a Defect
you're a Reject..a cast out Loner who finds Solitude in Wackness
..see you gotta be the Biggest Prick of all..a full blown Cactuss!!
E.coli heard played Lines bout Viruses?..well i Bring summit New..
..w/ the Flow N Structure in my Chek in..i hold more Heat than You
....jus like your current Loss Rate..B.I. just hit you for Six....
..being an Acrobatic Actor..is the only way you'll ever Flip a Script

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u beat a herb and think your hard...its amazing
when the crackhouse burned...
.....all BI’s dreams went down blazing
the government hired him cuz bush likes his lips
thats crazy shit...
...u think u an agent cuz u been hired to suck government dick
this niggas starvin...so now he trys to eat pussy wit a knife
youre a broke bum...
...thats why your content with the shitty things in life
youre garbage hoe...there are some things u need to know
you aint a man...u wouldnt have the biggest dick in a all lez porno
BI thinks he is a beast cuz his mom is half cow
even if u spit using verizon wireless...
...............we still wouldnt want to hear u now
this battle is over...i merked u just for some enjoyment
elton john likes BI
cuz his throat stays deep like niggas on unemployment

wtf????????????..............damn if he stole your verse leave a link or something.....there aint no need for all the extra comments cuz......

lmao....wtf?? are you talkin about dumbass....
dayme...lmao...me bite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dayme...and you think I'd bite off you????????
who the fuck are you??
so many fuckin questions

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here it is shit face hannibal S anexo


banned for porno. -feeble

dont put that bullshit in this thread........take that somewhere else.....quit tryin to clog our thread u fuckin hater

Opening: BI
Punches: tie
Personals: BI
Vocab: tie
Flow: BI
Structure: BI
Closer: e coli

I hate to vote like that cuz it seems off but ur structure kinda fucked it all up e...Good verse thoo
Return da favor by voting on me vs narcotics thx

Hmmmm...B.I Detained takes this battle. e.coli, u had sum really played out punches man, like every battle u see here, sumbody is talking about sex, u gotta b more original than that, like espically since u are a vet, I'd expect sumthin more original man. Now with that said, I award B.I for punchlines, his hit harder and were more original.

Structure i award to e.coli, I really like that, how u clearly identify when the punches are striking, I don't see that too often and it works really well.

Multies are awarded to B.I, he did have many more and his verse flowed a lot better than e.coli's in my eyes (barely tho)

Personals are also awarded to B.I, his were much better and struck much harder. Plus, he had more

Not a complete merking but the W does to go B.I here
Vote- B.I Detained


Hit me up with honest votes with the battles in my sig plz. thx.

thanks for the breakdown cuz


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Opening: BI
Punches: e.coli
Personals: BI
Vocab: tie
Flow: e.coli
Structure: BI
Closer: e coli
enjoyment:e.coli

Vote: e.coli

e.coli alot harder than i thought he would his record shitty but he still got this. B.I u could have but a lil more effort in ur punches.But ya'll both need to elevate a lil in the flow cause some ur shit didnt flow at all

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close shit man,

flow-tie
punches-b.i
opener-tie
closer-e.coli
structure-b.i

overall-b.i but very close shit,

plz plz hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...233#post1008233 ...thx............pz