REPLIED TO:
DEVA
SPIKESANDERS
APE


IIIIIIIIIII…..
fire punchelines with hooks to reinforce it.
Use synonomous words to murder verbs-
And get thesaurus endorcements.
raisen the bar between being decent and subpar-
there's 5 vowels 5 letters between A and E-
sutract those 2-
that leaves 8 but all i need-
is 5 bars so basically I~O~U 3.
Rip your cortex and quadracepts-
My METASPHORS(4's) are INSTRUMENTAL so spit them in QUARTETS.
flows from a carnivore that spits by the liter-Rip you to centimeters-
My raps adapt to SYLLABUS formats….for PENTAMETERS.
NONCENTZ spits shots easier than a hair trigger can pull it-
With the strength to split your body with a gun quicker then a bullet.
I got the illest rhymes in my veigns coarsen……
the kind of rhymes that can leave your career in moarnen-
The type that SON a rappers like early morneng-
The type that can turn jehovas witnesses to mormins.
Cause To me…… rappers is wasted flesh like foreskin.
And im trapped In an industry of dick riders…..
hated by maggets cause I force fagets to bleed endorphins –
Then swallow their boyfriends ejaculated orphins.
I School fools like speciel ed classess…….
Then massess class~ify as speciel ed-
Cause eveything I spits RETARDED…..
If you get hit and survive….
you weren’t the TARGET… that BULLET was just MISS~LED-
if i didn’t want you alive but dead instead….
Id spit heat seeking lyrics focused to your bodies farenheit temp-
that can track you from an atlas to atalantis with no place exzempt.
there could never be another-every since my dna was discovered-
I couldn’t even fuck an aids patient with no rubber.
im to ill…and at this point I don’t care-
cause rappers is so weak they only battle me for free healthcare.
Leave contenders open…….dip in their hemoglobin-
Then Play orgomy with an arterey-
Spell assault and battery then autograph my name for the ortopsy.
No need to spit sick….. I just vomit comments-
that rock like comets-
Not just murder the track but …first degree… bomb it-
when im on it.

uppin

Whoa. Can you say Word perfect?
I like the drop.
Hot shit son.
The wordplay was off the ringer!
The content was dope and full of depth!
The structure left a lil to be desired but definitely flowable.
Hot drop boi!!!!
Keep em coming.

thanks pop i hope cats can see the punches in this i did a more complex format the my usual

YO WORD THIS SHIT WAS FYRE.EVERY THING, YOUR VOCAB, FLOW MULTIS, AND ESPECIALLY THE PUNCHES
WERE PERFECT. WHO CARES ABOUT STUCTURE WHEN ITS THS HOT.
A 10/10.
PZ.

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Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

thanks twin and i got your verse im on hold for robo though i might hasve another head fill his slot my bot who trying to get down with the cause

that was good...i liked the flow and the hits.....the rhyme scheme was heavy.....keep doin' more of that shit....

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Knowledge Is King

no doubt

up

uppin

damn WORD u did again homie.......evrything was hot as always...the vocab, structure, wordplay, metraphors.....evrything homie......shit i need to elevate to ur level.....overall ur drop was dope as hell

Peace

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