Strategize, ostracize, eliminating ya flows/
Its tyme to show these rookies just how this rap shyt goes/
Putting holes throo ya verse like I did throo ya cloths/
And get off into the wind like which way did he go/
I don't carry a scent so dude don't bring ya dogs/
Aint like u can see me anyway, im night crawler to ya'll/
I want u to die extra slow like u sick wit sars/
Just because im soft spoken im still down for the cause/
Like layin you and ya crew out on the blvd
Matter fact I seen ya girl, ya she still on tha balls/
Can you still taste my dick In her mouth? U better examine them jaws/
Cum stains in her eye exact hit no flaws/
Matter fact looking the mail I just sent back her draws/
Im bout to be all over ya ass like body painters/
Tearin apart ya ligaments shyt rip like paper/
Im runnin on octane like I swallowed some rocket fuel/
You aint winnin this battle dude, u don?t carry the tools/
You don't carry the right equipment/
to dismantle this mental chemist/
so see, after this verse is finished/
watch ya reputation ever so slowly diminish/
ya names no longer valid in this battle of malice/
why don't u spit some gangsta shyt and try to show me some talent/
cause the shyt I heard thus far aint worth my ballet/- S.S.

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

LOL THIS WAS DIFFERENT AND ILL YOU ATTACKED THE SUBJECT AS WELL AS OTHERS.

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

good drop.
i think the structure definitely was a lil weak but other than that it was hot.
I like the imagery and the worplay, take a lil more time to check your grammar and ish.
Great subject, I like the street appeal.
I ain't on that nerd shit.
Keep it crackin!

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WORD~P- uninhabited
RULE- Memory Lane
VISCOSITY- The Diary Of A Thug

come on niggaz dont sleep on this.

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

uppin for some feedback.....

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

your vocab was good, structure was weak... but the content
was different and I liked that... your flow was good despite a
weak structure... this is not by far the best I've read from you
but a good peice never the less.

thx for the feedback A.T..
UPPIN.

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

UPPIN....................

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

this was good you had some good metas and nice lines pretty funny in some parts good drop man keep it up

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The Weathers Art
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My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

yo thx for the feed back niggas.
uppin.......

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

Yeah, man, sick drop.....everything was on tack except for(as noted) your structure.All it requires is some work but none-the-less, good drop.....nice wordplay with the metaphors and such...

Peep this, if you could......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...502#post1011502

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(RB's "ill" MCs)


Otherwise known as Artikulate

thx for the feedback.
uppin.....

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

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