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12-23-03, 09:42 PM
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No Hating On Us feat. R.M *Feedback Needed*
IP: 0141 4C3B
"Check it out it be R.M -n- I, reply and tell us what u think."
Verse One: Gman Verse Two: R.M Chorus: Gman Gman feat. R.M- No Hating On Us
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12-24-03, 11:41 AM
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IP: 0864 D8FE
"Uppin for feedback."
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12-24-03, 05:59 PM
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IP: 0864 D8FE
"Up."
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12-24-03, 07:46 PM
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IP: 0864 D8FE
"Yet again."
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12-25-03, 12:19 AM
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IP: 0864 D8FE
"Damn sleepers, up."
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12-25-03, 12:56 PM
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IP: 0864 D8FE
"OMG, up."
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12-25-03, 04:11 PM
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IP: 5A2B FBF8
this songs aite.. flow was pretty good.. the hook was alright... it wasn't really catchy ehh... emotions fit the topic pretty much...
overall an aite track  keep droppn em i'm from atx too wel... i'm livng here right now... hit me up on AIM: mystiqal 3mc33 |
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12-25-03, 05:32 PM
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
beats raw........like your flow, reminds me of a mix between jada and the clipse....lyrics pretty good on both parts..emotion kinda non existant on your part and the chourus..............chourus woulda been a million times better with more emotion.....overall nice.....keep em comming..........production average, but then again almost everybodys is,lol
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12-25-03, 05:44 PM
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IP: B9D4 BC62
you need emotion..your style is a lil too commercial for me..i aint feelin this beat all that much.. topic is blah, the hook is just too plain(again needs emotion) im just bein harsh though....this is a decent drop none the less...keep em comin
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12-26-03, 06:11 AM
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IP: B4AC 694E
someone jacked a JC beat.....
your ennunciation is BOOO. No emotion at all, well you spit kinda monotone Vocals are mad low. Flow is ight, simple. not horrible, but nuttin id listen to twice. ..second cat....no one on the west coast knows your name, so relax. More simplistic lyrics and flow. .pz.
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12-27-03, 08:36 PM
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IP: 1B3B C284
i have this beat on my comp..its hot..ur delivery could be abit better on the 1st verse...but the lyrics are hot and the hook is aite..liked ur voice alot.. the 2nd guy on the track u reviewed..hola at me if u wanna collab..aim - w2raekwon..msn raekownz@hotmail.com
the 2nd guy was ok..slow flow..voice was good..rhymes are ok. track 7.3/10
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12-28-03, 01:44 AM
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IP: 01EB 07F9
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basically almost everything he said....lol.....especially about the west coast not knowing your name, that was funny...but anywayz, delivery was off, flow is too choppy, and hook wasn't fantastic....second guy was ok for the first few seconds, then he just died out in my ears.....ummm i'd give this a 5/10.....needs work, but stay up and keep doin your thing....OnE I'm Ghost... |
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12-29-03, 09:14 PM
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IP: 0141 4C3B
"Aight, thanks for the feedback. Uppin for more."
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12-29-03, 11:15 PM
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IP: A3D6 6837
beat is coo.
quality is ok.. not to good. flow is MONOTONE. kill monotone. you sound the same with no variation in ya voice. try spittin like your casting out a demon. turn the vocals up a bit. lyrics are not to good not to bad. second buy. flow is not my style. i see potential. but it seems like he tryin to hard. ryhme scheme is simple. chorus is monotone. with that fake phone effect. i see elevation. |
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