Aight Lets Go

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You drop first
No feeding
No biting
No recycling
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes
No freeposting
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can u raise tha limit a lil higher cause i wasnt payin attetion i thought it said 14- 16 so u wanna do 14-16 lines

Nah.... 10 lines
I dont like to write alot
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Waitin on you......
I'll drop right after you....
Blind post i guess.......
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cats reppin some unknown agency..thinking he can fuck wit me
I’ma wreck this wannabe put him in an early retirement like jay z
Rip this nigga leave his embarrassed like that cat in his avatar
Coverin his face….tryin to hide his identity like he’s a porn star
My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location
Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration
This cat thinks he gots fame.. COME ON he barley beat mary-jane
Ya whack is what I’m sain…I come at higher cost like my name is cocaine
This cat lost and said he didn’t drop he was at the hospital cuz his cousin got shot
Hah Nice excuss man….lets me guess ya cousin was in a drive by and he was tupac


EXplanations:

line 1:check his sig its says THE AGENCY

line 2:in his sig is jayz

line 3:dude in his avy got his face covered

line 4:dude in the avy hinin his identity

line 5:has nothin in his location

line 7:says famous in his sig and he beat mary jane 3-5

line 8:cocaine cost more than mary jane(weed)

line 9 & 10: said he didnt drop some 1 logged on his name and dropped for him and that he was at the hospital cause his cuz got shot heres tha link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82923

Joker, ya style is a joke........ Like batman you can't see me
Tha Ace is Superior.... So theres no way of you to defeat me
So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end...
.............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again
Ya stupid ....Acceptin my call out was ya first of many mistakes
Steppin up ta me.... Ya grab the mic and suddenly ya wrist breaks
Ya to weak....Ya can't handle tha wrath that i'm bout to unleash
Your undefeated, But theres no chance in hell you'll beat me Kapeesh
Ya rockin Nas in yo sig..... So how bout you try ta ether to this
Ya rockin tha Joker name..... and simply it came easier ta diss


NO I'M NOT GOING TO EXPLAIN MY PUNCHES

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opener - tie both suck
closer - ILL
punches - ILL
personals - meh
wordplay - blah none what so ever worthy
overal - ILL...stop half assing

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

Joker, ya style is a joke........ Like batman you can't see me
Tha Ace is Superior.... So theres no way of you to defeat me
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WAK...BUT DECENT...
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So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end...
.............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again
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basic shit,.....
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Ya stupid ....Acceptin my call out was ya first of many mistakes
Steppin up ta me.... Ya grab the mic and suddenly ya wrist breaks
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Ya to weak....Ya can't handle tha wrath that i'm bout to unleash
Your undefeated, But theres no chance in hell you'll beat me Kapeesh
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wak...
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Ya rockin Nas in yo sig..... So how bout you try ta ether to this
Ya rockin tha Joker name..... and simply it came easier ta diss
basic...^^^^^^^^^^^^
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cats reppin some unknown agency..thinking he can fuck wit me
I’ma wreck this wannabe put him in an early retirement like jay z
)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Rip this nigga leave his embarrassed like that cat in his avatar
Coverin his face….tryin to hide his identity like he’s a porn star
good...^^^^^^^^
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My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location
Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration
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dope...^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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This cat thinks he gots fame.. COME ON he barley beat mary-jane
Ya whack is what I’m sain…I come at higher cost like my name is cocaine
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basic....^
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This cat lost and said he didn’t drop he was at the hospital cuz his cousin got shot
Hah Nice excuss man….lets me guess ya cousin was in a drive by and he was tupac
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basic...
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vote/joker overall better verse...

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opener - Joker
closer - ILL
punches - Tie
personals - Joker
wordplay - Joker
Metas- Tie(was little)
Multies- Tie(same)
Final Count- 6-4
Win and My Vote- JOKER!!!

I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

both cats had decent flows but the punches were weak, i'd say joker took it on personal punches, but ILL's flow was a little better, still it's the punches that win battles, and ILL didn't have many personals at all. vote...joker

aite this was a pretty clean battle feelin both y styles..joker u aint half bad bro..good shit liked the retired jay z line but its been played in 2 dayz..who ever reps jay z the otehr person will amke a punch about it..come a bit more orignal..Ill good shit So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end...
.............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again <<, that did it for me...