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Old 12-25-03, 02:14 PM   #1
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AE track..."let it snow"

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this is for AE ... short lil verse i threw together... lemme know what ya think. the topic was "let it snow"

oh yah...featuring brian mcknight in the outro....yeah yeah!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/concisebeatzmusic.htm

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Old 12-25-03, 02:48 PM   #2
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Let It Snow
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"Listening...Beat is decent. Lyrics are good. Quality is aight. Chrous is aight. Overall for an AE track it's aight."

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Old 12-25-03, 05:46 PM   #3
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eh...thanx bro..

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Old 12-25-03, 06:34 PM   #4
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shit was dope, feelin all of it, flipped topic nicely...hella quotables, dope lyrically, a little monotone...but nice shit
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Old 12-25-03, 06:39 PM   #5
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yeah i was thinkin the same..about the monotone shit....dude, why dont you say anything while we are record you son of a bitch?

anyways..yeah i did notice that
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Old 12-25-03, 11:09 PM   #6
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returnin the favor.........i like the beat

you got flow.......on topic......lyrics are regular.....nothin to be like...whoa or nuthin

lmao @ at you singin......sall gravy

i was entertained...........thats whats most important
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Old 12-26-03, 12:48 AM   #7
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eh thanx man..much appreciated
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Old 12-26-03, 12:06 PM   #8
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lol.......nice singing voice,lol........nice concept......lyrics was pretty deep, but I agree way 2 monotone, but it kinda fits the track, production was average.overall not bad.stay up
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Old 12-26-03, 01:25 PM   #9
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beat was garbage.....


not my type of track...cuz i really dont like soft shit....lyrics were ok.....hook definitely gotta go...haha...shit was rediculous....you was off beat at times also......well this was iight i guess....but not my thing....





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Old 12-26-03, 05:59 PM   #10
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sure....lmao

thanx for the feedback

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Old 12-27-03, 01:49 AM   #11
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uppin for responses
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Old 12-27-03, 11:21 AM   #12
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beat was garbage.....

^^he prolly woulda rather heard you spit on Young Droop - 187 Skills instrumental. lol

Kid aint hiphop
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Old 12-27-03, 03:14 PM   #13
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lmao...my words exactly
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Old 12-29-03, 10:04 AM   #14
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k- u said my lyrics were shit, have u listned to yourself, the only thing u really got goin' 4 u is quality, u'r style is PLAYED... u sound the same as every other white underground rapper.. flow was ok, a little sketchy at times.. but fo-real u shouldn't be talkin' shit.. an' as 4 nick wilson up there.. he's say'n i got dick ryders.. a dick ryder's technically a fan, so it's coo.. he your only dick ryder, so i'm doin' better than u r..... haha, jus' play'n...

track was descent, buti'm sick of this style..
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Old 12-29-03, 12:35 PM   #15
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lmao? did i even comment on his track? i just made fun of another kid for saying a dope beat was garbage. but yeah, im on his dick pretty bad. so since im on his dick, i will tell you to take another listen to the lyrics of this track homie. you dont need punchlines and shit to be dope lyrically, thats why you kids are all over cin ladens dick, cuz he comes with that basic punchline lyrical style.

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