"Got No Circle of Hope"
^ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/b...inmentmusic.htm

.........Again... this ROUGH album shit, the hook is weak... anything i put up now is not final quality, an' usually wont have the final version of the hook, jus' a quick hook to fill space... fedback on flow an' lyrics... 1

leave link i'll check yours...

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listenin 2 now....


beat: nice beat, slowish beatz sound tite, specially when its a darkish kind...

lyrics: the lyrics were coo, sum bars didnt rhyme, but u made up 4 those wit sum of ure other bars, flow was coo...it fitted

hook: i kinda liked this hook, it flowed nice wit shit

vocals: badd quality & way 2 loud..thass the only thing i didnt like....


7.5/10


CIN

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J.Cin aka JJdaBABAY
THE A-TEAM/MONEY HUNGRY
www.soundclick.com/JCin6one9


Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre

word, the bars that don't rhyme are on purpose, kinda a bridge to smooth out mayjor sound changes.... good looks

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uppin'... leave linx..

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Nice track overall homie i'm feelin dat beat to da fullest



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lol.......u sound like this rapper from chicago,E-Cilla,......tight shit....I like your slowed down flow, u got a good voice for that...lyrics was good..beat was coo........yeah , quality was shitty......but not horrible....nice shit overall

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I don't like your style . . . delivery could use some work, your flow seems a bit chopped man . Vocals are Extremely to high man . . . . Chorus, was un-understandable at points . . .

I didn't really feel this to be honest.

good looks... keep 'em poppin'... lol

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oh shit, im feelin this right now

im gonna be real harsh though on a real level.

im high as fuck so im gonna let you into my mind here for a second. First of all man, ive told you about these intros and now i figured out why i hate it so fucking much. When i listen to the base of your track, i view it as real hiphop, dope. But go back to the intro, the "blunt mccc!!!" and "hoooo" <like a bird or something... that just sounds so fake and more on the commercial level i guess.. damn i hope your high

quality is garbage, but thats known
beat is alright, pretty dope i guess
intro, is not only gay, its the same exact gay intro from the rest of your tracks.. cept you added a gay "wha wha wha what"
flow is real nice, real nice
lyrically, this shit was aiight, definately not wack, they were good, just didnt really make me think about how dope they were or anything..
hook, is coo if the voice didnt change and get hella crazy..
anywhere that you talk and your not spitting.. this track is gay..
overall this was real solid... nice work lol

i guess its cool to give grades nowadays.. but i just realized i dont feel like doing that.. pzzz outside

see, now i respect that... an' for the i better be high comment... my name's blunt, what do u think... well actually i was more on the drunk side.. an' u say "that just sounds so fake and more on the commercial level i guess.. "... what's wrong wit soundin' comercial.. i'm not try'n to , i'm jus' big'n up my crew an' the producer... good loox tho.. 1

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word

its not what you saying though, its how your saying it that sounds fake to me

do you plan on getting at least a dynamic mic sometime? if so when?

i said in my other thread... shure kms27 ... gettin' it by end of january at the latest

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ayo brother this was nice.. it was felt no doubt.. sick flow, ur voice is soundin more and more grimey every time i listen to u and more relaxed.. nice lyrics, those were definitly felt.. the chorus was a bit messy, it sounded too cluttered.. just work out that, and u got a sick track on ya hands.. piece 1 brother stay up

word... thx.. 1

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