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Old 12-30-03, 04:38 PM   #1
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this one is about my enjoyment of rap from old school to vanilla ice to new school such as da band and me tryin to become a legend

feedback is appreciated

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Old 12-30-03, 05:48 PM   #2
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LMAO@ur sig nice !
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Nice Touch In The Beat This Beat Fit Rite Into the concept.

lyricks are thight u put it down on this track. u was clear in yah rhymes and thats important. yah flow was fire kid this track was nice i must say.
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Old 12-30-03, 08:30 PM   #3
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listenin now..... new style beat with the high pitched singin.... sounds ok...... nice roll call hehe.... lyrics are straight.... decent drop.


btw check 'sorry muthafuckers' by me upin here too


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Old 12-30-03, 08:41 PM   #4
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thanks for the feedback....drop links and i'll critique the same as of this one u guyz r doin 4 me
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Old 12-30-03, 10:31 PM   #5
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i like the beat, but i think its a little soon after the single came out to use it...but whatever....flow is ok...mic presence wasnt all there, adlibs were too loud...but im feelin your voice..if the quality wasnt wack it'd be a lot better cuz your voice sounds cool...lyrics were cool

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Old 12-30-03, 10:59 PM   #6
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my quality was mediocre and i didnt do many addlibbs cuz i did voice oversthxs tho
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Old 12-31-03, 12:17 AM   #7
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^^yes and the ones you did were too loud, no prob tho
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Old 12-31-03, 02:11 AM   #8
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returnin the favor... damn i love this kanye beat.... havnt listened to it in a while though, but anyways, back tto the track... flow was pretty good... i thought it was gonna be bad, but its pretty nice...
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Old 12-31-03, 02:21 AM   #9
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adlibs for sure too loud.. and too many

"uhhh yeah uhh yeah uh huh jea!! uh yeah!"
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Old 12-31-03, 09:51 AM   #10
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therez nothin wrong with that....just alil emphasis
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Old 12-31-03, 10:47 AM   #11
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Old 12-31-03, 11:25 AM   #12
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therez nothin wrong with that....just alil emphasis

lol, dawg stop trying to justify all the flaws ppl try and help you notice.
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Old 12-31-03, 11:44 AM   #13
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^^^i was bein serious it was for emphasis....all songs have flaws in them ...im just sayin those addlibbs were loud but i used alot of em for emphasis...uppin
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Old 12-31-03, 01:10 PM   #14
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dope beat...nice flow....lyrics were good....there was nothing wrong with this track...its pretty good...nice job hypno...i liked this shit...holla
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Old 12-31-03, 02:14 PM   #15
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thanks thog 4 the feedback man much appreciated
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