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RHYTHM 212 5 100.00%
Nephew J 0 0%
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Old 01-02-04, 05:06 PM   #1
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Quote:
Originally posted by Nephew J
Aight, here's my ten lines, wish I had more but that's fine whore//
Just hear tha lyrics I implore, hardcore throwin you on tha floor//

Whackest Opener Ever.
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Originally posted by Nephew J
I'm lyrical-insane causin' you lyrical-pain, shit I'ma kill and thats real//
You see me creepin RHYTHM 2-1-2, see you blew up as I errupt//
Your rythym is goin korupt, you shoulda ducked out, you bout nothin//

The Only Rythym That Is Goin Corupt Is Yours. Your Scheme Changed And It's Bad.
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Originally posted by Nephew J
I'm comin and I'm showin you somethin, you fake and these lyrics I make//
What's it take to shake you off, I bust a smirnoff bottle on yo dome//
Decapitate you, put you head on a chrome platter, give it to yo dad//

His Dad? You Fake And These Lyrics I Make...Are Too?
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Originally posted by Nephew J
Shit, hes mad, fuck it, I'll kill all you kinfolk when I burst like tha Incredible Hulk//
You all gone, so bitch on you I piss and aint nobody goin to miss ya//

Yup.

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Originally posted by RHYTHM 212
half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown
simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome

LMAO.Ouch.
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i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit

Made Sense. but Whack.
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Originally posted by RHYTHM 212
"May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack
cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back

Meh. But I can see Rhythm doin dis...
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Originally posted by RHYTHM 212
tryin to kick box wit god.......
....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned
Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch//
...For that ya life is Done

Shittiest Closer Ever. WEC FOR YOU!

Vote: Rhythm...In The Shittiest Battle I have Ever Seen At The Front.
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Old 01-02-04, 05:21 PM   #2
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There is Token Tryin to Play Hero. Gotta Love Them New IR Mods...Tryin' To Save The World...This Battle Is a Done Deal. Nephew Clearly Got Killed.

Easy Tex..I Mean Token...
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Old 01-02-04, 06:37 PM   #3
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Vote-Nephew Jew
cause he hit with his punches a lot harder
plus he is my hero,
rhythm jsut all around sucks,
not much more i can say
 
Old 01-02-04, 06:49 PM   #4
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half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown
simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome
i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit
"May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack
cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back
tryin to kick box wit god.......
....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned
Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch//
...For that ya life is Done

Punches were decently hard
Wordplay wasn't that great
Personals...not many
Flow...good..
Creativity....straight...
You win.


Win= Ryhtm
 
Old 01-02-04, 07:43 PM   #5
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Nephew J
Aight, here's my ten lines, wish I had more but that's fine whore//
Just hear tha lyrics I implore, hardcore throwin you on tha floor//
I'm lyrical-insane causin' you lyrical-pain, shit I'ma kill and thats real//
You see me creepin RHYTHM 2-1-2, see you blew up as I errupt//
Your rythym is goin korupt, you shoulda ducked out, you bout nothin//
I'm comin and I'm showin you somethin, you fake and these lyrics I make//
What's it take to shake you off, I bust a smirnoff bottle on yo dome//
Decapitate you, put you head on a chrome platter, give it to yo dad//
Shit, hes mad, fuck it, I'll kill all you kinfolk when I burst like tha Incredible Hulk//
You all gone, so bitch on you I piss and aint nobody goin to miss ya//

The Opener was weak. I didnt like how your rhyme scheme was, and it was really simplistic... hardly any good punches. I didnt like this verse at all. Need to work on rhyme schem, creativity, and punches...
p.s. I know who you really are... [/coor]

RHYTHM 212
half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown
simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome
[color=blue]Wack and weak

i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit
and attempt but a fail attempt
"May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack
cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back
Stupid and dumb
tryin to kick box wit god.......
....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned
Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch//
...For that ya life is Done
Weak close, and a failed attempt to wordplay
I know who you are as well,

Im not ganna vote, for my own reasons. But this was fuckin funny. You guys always doing some crazy ass shit... LOL
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Old 01-02-04, 07:45 PM   #6
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^ sorry for the fuck up ^ I was to busy laughing my ass off about this. I cant believe this shit was done, Hahaha. I wonder who is ganna win, LOL ^
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Old 01-02-04, 08:01 PM   #7
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rythim had a better structured verse wit harder punches- not much else here to look at...but i give him that much......

nephew j- i didnt like anything u had.....u spit soft wit played meti4's and weak punches incorporated into a wak newbie structure......

not much to like here...but RYTHIM gets my vote
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Old 01-02-04, 08:11 PM   #8
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ehh..ok battle but i give this to Rhyme he has better structure beter harder landing punches and just a better overall verse.. Nephew you didnt do too bad even though you had some played punches...keep trying dawg you will get there aventualy. No Hate, Just a vote..Props to Both

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Old 01-02-04, 08:12 PM   #9
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Can You Both Please return the favor and post honest votes on my battle..i took the time you should too..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103107

Thank You. Much Appriciated
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