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Verses Due: 01/02/04 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends: 01/04/04 11:59pm EST

Good Luck......

haha...I wanted a challenge....oh well

WHOA! Kyle’s not dope….vets tend to ignore
that his pedophilia intervention’s…………..
the only time he reaches the final 4!
You whore! ……..
Here u can’t get dickridden by ure newbie brigade
RB goes with my flow, with ures….they just wade!
Fuck’n Lame!..........
kinda like ure battle with cam…..ure gonna lose this
Changed name from Feeble to Enhance……
just to claim he made an improvement!
Ure useless!……
So I’m a say things I cant take back & never regret it
It’s pathetic….
This matchups a broken sauna………I don’t sweat it!
Ure respected?.....
I’ve beaten you in text, topicals…everything u know
never touched a mic…..
Ill take my mic cord and strangle u…to beat u in audio!
Don’t ya know…..
Its a juvenile hall birthday! U have to watch me clown u
Embrace ure syndrome! so you can finally be down too!
It’s true…..
Feeble equal’s retard theres no doubt about it…take a medal
This battles got the same result…..
As if I gave him Kyle a knife and asked him who’s special!
I’ve got potential…..
And feebz is a cripple….even his words falter
Plus, he’s a pathological liar, LOOK!

You we’re way off……
Kenny’s not here….So Kyle’s on the chopping block tonight
Because…..
Feeble was known to come hard…..b4 I took away his enzyte!
That’s right!......
RB hates that u bit my style Kyle….how can I be wrong?
Go back to hav’n stretched lines...so you’ll finally belong!

*edited for spelling

Read Sig for maximum effect. .

. . read it, now!

battlin im known complete, u dont defeat, u wont compete. .
evolves nuts are a pothole.. thats why you own the streets
walter?. . skills are out of reach, & he can't afford to claim it
cuz battle wise i cover Walls like a mortgage payment. .
im ya lord just say it, u only get dr's but soon that cult'll fall
cuz im like home realtors. . i sell off everything walter wall . .
under pressure im recalling he melts.. you'll fall & get dealt
tag team champ in my league? bitch im withdrawing ya belt
face is crawling with welts, i saw ur sig & swelled with hatred
I moved onto Elite. .
its sad u gotta brag about being rated the best in elevated
this is hell's verbatim. . im in with the devil on claimin ya fate
discussed the pros.. proposals my dick, walter aims to debate
walters heads the target i came to deflate & i'll hurt this walt
fucked up so bad. .
. .after this battle only medal you'll win is the purple heart
walter they speak of u sayin, he's never gonna reach that high
but talkin of me they say.. this head will beat wall. . like that guy. .
i'll expose this dickrider. . around feeble he's a horny kid. .
shit, he's voted for me in every round of this tournament!

yo doctor j dont try to play, cause you gay
im the money master your biggest disaster
i eat snakes for breakfast and fuck hos for lunch
and mo hos for brunch

master money aint no bunny, honey
aint it funny? im mysterious master money man and ive got a plan
so step back or get jacked like willy mcwam

uhhh
ughhh

master money is in the house
i hope you wearin a blouse
like your spouse
bitch

Damn. . I'm impressed by the both of you. This was a dope battle. And I vote honestly, both of yall are my boys. Here's the breakdown. .


Feeble's Verse


Read Sig for maximum effect. .

. . read it, now!

battlin im known complete, u dont defeat, u wont compete. .
evolves nuts are a pothole.. thats why you own the streets
Dope. . 9/10
walter?. . skills are out of reach, & he can't afford to claim it
cuz battle wise i cover Walls like a mortgage payment. .
Good, 7/10
im ya lord just say it, u only get dr's but soon that cult'll fall
cuz im like home realtors. . i sell off everything walter wall . .
Wording was ehh, punch was aight. 6/10
under pressure im recalling he melts.. you'll fall & get dealt
tag team champ in my league? bitch im withdrawing ya belt
Nah. 5/10
face is crawling with welts, i saw ur sig & swelled with hatred
I moved onto Elite. .
its sad u gotta brag about being rated the best in elevated
Dope personal n punch. 9/10
this is hell's verbatim. . im in with the devil on claimin ya fate
discussed the pros.. proposals my dick, walter aims to debate
These lines are getting kind of played, the concept rather. decent line. 7/10
walters heads the target i came to deflate & i'll hurt this walt
fucked up so bad. .
. .after this battle only medal you'll win is the purple heart
Good. 8/10
walter they speak of u sayin, he's never gonna reach that high
but talkin of me they say.. this head will beat wall. . like that guy. .
You're getting kind of played with the name disses, this was good tho. 7/10
i'll expose this dickrider. . around feeble he's a horny kid. .
shit, he's voted for me in every round of this tournament!
Good personal. 8/10

Overall 68/90 = .755555555555555

Walters Verse

WHOA! Kyle’s not dope….vets tend to ignore
that his pedophilia intervention’s…………..
the only time he reaches the final 4!
Decent. 7/10
You whore! ……..
Here u can’t get dickridden by ure newbie brigade
RB goes with my flow, with ures….they just wade!
Nice, 8/10
Fuck’n Lame!..........
kinda like ure battle with cam…..ure gonna lose this
Changed name from Feeble to Enhance……
just to claim he made an improvement!
lol 8/10
Ure useless!……
So I’m a say things I cant take back & never regret it
It’s pathetic….
This matchups a broken sauna………I don’t sweat it!
Ight 7/10
Ure respected?.....
I’ve beaten you in text, topicals…everything u know
never touched a mic…..
Ill take my mic cord and strangle u…to beat u in audio!
Nice connection, dope personal. 9/10
Don’t ya know…..
Its a juvenile hall birthday! U have to watch me clown u
Embrace ure syndrome! so you can finally be down too!
HAHAHA dope! 10/10
It’s true…..
Feeble equal’s retard theres no doubt about it…take a medal
This battles got the same result…..
As if I gave him Kyle a knife and asked him who’s special!
Blah. . 5/10
I’ve got potential…..
And feebz is a cripple….even his words falter
Plus, he’s a pathological liar, LOOK!

quote:
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Originally posted by Feeble Minded
im going to beat you in LLL walter!
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Nah. . 6/10
You we’re way off……
Kenny’s not here….So Kyle’s on the chopping block tonight
Because…..
Feeble was known to come hard…..b4 I took away his enzyte!
Played a bit n decent punch. 6/10
That’s right!......
RB hates that u bit my style Kyle….how can I be wrong?
Go back to hav’n stretched lines...so you’ll finally belong!
Ok closer. . 7/10

Overall 73/100 = 73%

Overall this was a very dope battle, both of you came extremely good. A couple of played lines here and there, everything was close.

Feeble - You had a nice verse, everything was there. Nice personals and wordplay n punches. I liked it a lot. You kinda got a bit caught up dissing his name. But overall you verse was tight, and the punches hit very hard.

Walter - Nice showing from you as well, a lot of dope punches thrown. The complexity was far superior than Feeble. But, the only thing was your punches didn't hit as hard as Feebles. The wordplay was nice, the personals were good. But Feeble took personals and punches, and the wordplay was close. Also, the two or three words right after each bar to rhyme with the previous was quite unnessecary IMO. If you would have concentrated more on the punches instead of multis you would have had a better shot. But Feeble came harder than you, plain and simple.

Dope battle fellas, but my vote goes to Feeble here.

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Feeble wins cause I say so.



Walt I'm surprised little flow, innane punches. All around a sucktackular job. I'm disappointed in you.





vote: Feebs, on the basis of flow, punches, personals and wit. Good job tiger.



Wait this vote won't count will it?
















Oh well.

WalterWall[/b]
Ok At First i thought walter wall won this,but...
WW had some very dope lines but because he droped
better on Evovle's Better i was a bit dissapointed , m8 you still came real hard anything but i thought you would have came evn harder than last time- dont get me wrong this was dopeness

^ That line was dope. i was with ur shit till the end seem'd like u got bored

Feeble
This is were quailty beats quanity i thought feeble came harder and im more to his style than WW's just easier to read at times althought WW's style has better connection....anyway feeble came Dope also has good flow and most of his lines connected



Vote=Feeble

by an edge.

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And BTW = Tops i was in the league.......
so dont edit it or il be pretty pissed. if you before reading this.

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where my win be at?

I should of come harder
this is all among friends
.........Good battle feebz

lol, Once this 1 finishes if you get the win itll be 3-2 me

We'll get into details on AIM, but all is well

I thought it was wack how Inversery changed his vote after reading the others
so keep vot'n HonestlY peeps, this'll be the closest battle in tourney left

damn dude...dis battle was crazy.....

in other wordz...crazy = Dope!....

man i got so much to say about both verses....

but i hate typin...lol...so i'll try to make this vote....

worth being decent....aight check it...

vote = Feeble Minded....

why because...when i was readin feeble's verse...

i was like...oh shit..on most parts....

and i laughed at all da witty linez he had....

im sayin like...he worded dem sooo dope...

it was crazy...i really didn't see nothing wrong....

with feeble's verse...he stayed consistent...and just...

came all out and stuff....good jon homie...props....

aight now for Walter Wall....dudeeee.....

u had dis battle...until u got at da end....

like da last 5-6 linez....i really just started....

to fall off...and get confused...cause u was coming along....

so good....but sumfin just happened homie....

like u started to get on block....or some shit....

but nevertheless u came decent as usual bro....

WeRd Up....but in all in all respect to both.....

i just felt feeble had da better verse.....nuffin more.....

nuffin less....props to you also Walter....

good battle guyz....stay up....

ps. = * once again...dis iz not no type of hate vote....

towards no body....hope ya'll understand dat....

i don't know ya'll to even start hatin....very talented....

much respect....and dat's real talk....but if ya'll feel like its.....

a hate vote...den please dis regard da vote....

once again good battle...*

Gh05t!

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