10 Lines
You First
Check In
No Feeding

checkin in on this cat............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ....

All Right...I'll Start Soon...
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Yo.....goin agaisnt me dawg/
its not rap ...its sin/
how u expect to win/
when all u flow is ACRO NIM's/
NAVEAH...cause ya MINDTRAPS is less the TEMPORI/
and ya ryhmes is nothin more then a 2 word vocabulary/
i spit fast balls....his ryhmes...i never seen a better LOB/
ur just a kid i practice on...imma call u CHEDDAR BOB/
so if u smart ..u would go shoot off ya dick head/
for i "COCK" back...and blow ..threw ya big head/
...im out...................1

man lets go...................i wanna get some votes............................................. .................................................. .

lets go man flowwwww.......................................... .................................................. .................................................. ...............................................

I'm Eat Barz For Fun............................ No Need For Me To Prove It
I'll Smack H.B. With A Cd........................ So He Can Face The Music
I'd Just Qoute Your Verse................... If I Was Really Up For Dissin
Cuz If Love IS Blind............. Then You Obivously Have 20/20 Vision
You're No Good........................... It's Really No Need For Me To Try
Barz Skillz Are Like Midgets On Stock, He's Only Gotta Short Supply
Sigh................. I'll Smack You Just Cuz The Fact Your Whack To Me
Yeah Do People Wanna See Hot Barz..Only In A Chocolate Factory
Thesis Is Ill, I He Lacks Skillz........................... And I'm The Winner
Imma Terrorist Cuz,
I'll Fly Through His Structure Like The World Trade Center

thats all u could think of dawg?...........thats it?....................ok....can we get some votes........

Shut Up....My Verse Was 10x
Better Than Yours And I Didn't
Even Try, Don't Sway. . .
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alright battle...sorta one sided.....

punches- this goes to thesis.....harder...more creative...

flow- thesis by a lil

structure- definately thesis

thesis had some fillers...but still enuf to take this....

hotbars.....your shit was to basic....elevate...

vote-thesis

No Filler...You Just
Didn't Understand
My Punches..........
1-0........................
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good god.

This was a slaughter.

Thesis destroyed this other guy...punches, flow, creativity...a blowout.

That other guy.....take some time to elevate, maybe get more complex with your rhyming. Create some clever concepts, mix it up...you're gonna get eaten alive with that kind of skill.

vote = thesis.

peace............

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^^^^ uhhh lines 5 and 9....no hate...just my opinion...i can tell you didn't try