Yall thought i was gone, and yall could have rap,
well im back, indian giver takin it back,
ain't takin no crap, i was settin the trap,
throw up, and still spitten better than yall cats,
yall ass wack, and yall can have that,
cuz if thats rap, shit, im quitin for a fact,
i'll have to do my own thang, i've made my own game,
started with change, and changed my whole name,
after fame i remained the same nigga,
just quicker to chug liquor, and spit at your lighter,
burnin the flamin faggots, haters, and lyers,
yall should retire, before yall start,
yall bodies in my freeza, and its still to hot,
never on top, stay at the bottom,
all on my nuts, get'um

Got'em


Guesssss Whossssss Backkkkkk

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No..go back away...

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Yeah this was ok i thought.....it was simple though....your structure was ok, it needs some work though....try keeping your lines around the same length so its structured good and so it helps the flow out...try adding some multies to this as well...but keep at it.

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^..LOL....what he said...

yeah i think this was too short,... oh and 'wow' ya back....lol... work on complexity, and vocab....