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Tha Shadow
DaLyRicaLViLLain
Dev

Verse #1:
yo bitch, just step back, don’t be frontin guys packin da straps/
cuz like rap, I be blastin caps, and simply jump u fuckin kats/
bitches puss and pinch hit, cuz u matha fucka’s can’t handle ya own shit/
so stick with ridin them dicks, cuz ridin with me, psssh, u dreamin kids/
stick wit ya nursery rhymes, just be killin the time, cuz I be bustin lines/
just see me and call 9-1-1, cuz u bitches be knowin I’m hittin up wit dem guns/
so juss run, makin it for me some fun, yell for some help, but ya crews done/
crushed, chewed, and chumped, cuz they all been served the heat, all 12 plus 1/
honors spent, no place left cept for 6 down deep, where the devil creeps/
keep it SEE-CRET, and maybe u can live to see the next day on the streets/

Hook:
don’t fuck with dat strap, get blasted back, 6 ta 32 caps/
with the 9, or the 10 mac, bitch u know where it’s at/
don’t be frontin, or cussin, cuz u’ll get the blood flushin/
especially when u be fuckin wit dat strap cuz u’ll get tha bustin/

Verse #2:
I think u motha fucka’s heard of me before, Gene Pool comin back wit da score/
juss open the doors, lay out the red carpet, cuz I’m back to bring it hardcore/
and to any of u’s thinkin my shit was weak, I’ll lay ya’s ta sleep/
12 deep instead of 6 feet, listen punk, ya juss been beat by true feats/
cuz I bring it real, RB always be the place holdin down the deals/
no time for matha fucka’s who squeal, cuz snitchers be fake/
like a race they cheat with every stepping pace, hold it, let’s think/
juss for a second here, oh wait, I got the answer, 3 slugs from da gun/
and we can get rid of all these posing basterds for actin up wit laughter/
cuz this is what I’m after, left CV so I can scope out, choke and punch out/
wackness that drags this site out, biters who can’t fight out, the masses/
all u’s think ya blackness, but half ya’s true color? Proply white wack ass rappa’s/
so come on, who u ppl think ya kiddin? Just quit ya biddin on winnin/
cuz in this business, ur only gonna be a witness, so bitches, best of wishes/

Hook:
don’t fuck with dat strap, get blasted back, 6 ta 32 caps/
with the 9, or the 10 mac, bitch u know where it’s at/
don’t be frontin, or cussin, cuz u’ll get the blood flushin/
especially when u be fuckin wit dat strap cuz u’ll get tha bustin/

Verse #3:
So hear me out while I conclude the bout, I stand stout/
and cash the fuck out, wit dat strap talkin wit a shout/
cuz their be no need, for me to waste my speech/
on 2 fag bitches caressin each others meat, juss sleep/
bitches please? Theirs no foolin me, so don’t play/
cuz I still got dat strap and I ain’t afraid ta spray/
lace with precise aim, cuz I got a tasteless style/
weedin out da lame, puttin out da less then wild/
cuz I’m vile, always spittin sick, the riffs an spliffs/
while u holdin ya dick, cuz I know my shit grips/
so just stick to ya seat, cuz if ya don’t, u be standin in heat/
cuz to large these beefs, for rookies that’s why I crypt reap/
cuz I speak it deep, and I keep to the streets, wit my beats/
so rememba u punk peeps, that when u see me u betta hear me/
Gene Pool no longer fuckin wit these lame ass hearings/
cuz I’m tired and sick, of hearin pussy bitches piss/
about the shit they put up with, it’s juss fuckin shit/
so I’ma make this easy, with a taste of ma strap/
pull the trigger back, now u know not ta fuck wit dat/

Hook: (x2)
don’t fuck with dat strap, get blasted back, 6 ta 32 caps/
with the 9, or the 10 mac, bitch u know where it’s at/
don’t be frontin, or cussin, cuz u’ll get the blood flushin/
especially when u be fuckin wit dat strap cuz u’ll get tha bustin/

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yo come on ppl leave some feedback on this muchly appreciated peace.

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This was alright here man......your structure is improving i think, it was much better in this piece than your others, good job....flow was pretty good in this, it stayed on point, kinda fell off at some points though but still good....you had some nice vocab in this....multies were ok....overall a alright piece....keep at it.

Overall, this was a pretty nice drop, although the subject matter was a little played out. Alot of the lines spit were ill, and overall, this was some good shit.

Verse 2 was the better of the three.

Your structure is decent, but overall, you basically need to work on the content a little, make it a little less basic.

Nice work though, keep dropping, one.

Dawg i like the shit, people say yea they've heard it all before, but fuck em if thats what you do then do the damn thang

lol thanx crackabox. but anyways how bout some more feedback on this ppl. like come on. only 3 replies and theirs 30 views. stop bein so fuckin lazy and leave some feedback if your gonna check this. leave a link to one of your open mics or somethin and I'll make sure to hit it up in return. peace. thanx for all the feedback so far.

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