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01-11-04, 01:48 PM | #1 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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When my eyes are closed
IP: 5A0F 8BBE
My mind is distored, orthidox flow with-in
life is dimin, used to hardknocks,life is retorted But when my eye-lids shut, I think nothing of it quiet times, I love it, the moons trim, and light over me Sittin staring off into space, never a minute of time I waste old pictures, I stare at the face.. my love is a lace Tight but not strung out enough, life is an aspect Never retoric neglect, or flourish the dim success rap,life,music,highs thats wat keeps me nourish'd I carry the staff, climb the highest feets' ride in fleets, keep members in there seats But at home, I think off the dome - and make mouth beats when my eyes are closed... lies fold, text is bold Colors become beautiful majestys, useful anasty's life becomes fantasys, things that I wish happened to me.. When my eyes are closed.... time never grow's old things that cannot get taught, are told Emptiness lurks inside of my body a friend to bring happiness to me, never happiness ..... even when my eyes are closed....
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01-11-04, 01:49 PM | #2 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 5A0F 8BBE
quik key but has alot of meaning...
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01-11-04, 02:01 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 910E 41A1
Told you on AIM, and I'll tell you here- this is dope...no matter how you look at it, it's awesome
Ill flow Ill meaning Ill topic Definately a good read, legend status if nothing else... Keep it up..I love reading |
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01-11-04, 02:30 PM | #4 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 5A0F 8BBE
thanks..
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01-11-04, 02:43 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
damn can someone please give me some feedback...
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01-11-04, 03:12 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: DC84 4CE0
Vis dawg i like 90% of your shit including this one my dawg keep doin what cha doin, the thang flowed together, and its the damn truth not even happiness with your eyes closed, i hear you my dawg
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01-11-04, 03:49 PM | #7 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
thanks
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01-11-04, 04:53 PM | #8 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
yo sek thanks for the legends nomination
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01-11-04, 09:46 PM | #9 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
omgggggggggggggggggggg UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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01-11-04, 09:48 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: 0035 52C6
that was tight
keep up ur shit
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01-11-04, 09:50 PM | #11 | ||||||
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uppin
pretty good man, i can feel ya check out my recent flows, the gotmeaning to em as well up em if you got any feedback The Arrival http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105711 Lifeline http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105839 |
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01-12-04, 03:54 PM | #12 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 44DD 120C
ight... upp for some reps
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01-12-04, 06:30 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 44DD 120C
sighs.. up
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01-12-04, 06:40 PM | #14 | |||||||
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some nice meaning in there, but the flow was off..... and the first couple of bars were unique.. if they flowed!.... but once it got past that... yeah pretty good.... nice scheme.. carried the rhyme well.....pZ....
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01-12-04, 07:37 PM | #15 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 44DD 120C
it flowed tho... just depending how u read or prenounce words
thanks for a hit tho
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