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01-11-04, 03:40 PM
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Drop Of Genius
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Thanks to my family (keystyle)
IP: 509D 5063
This was a keystyle done in bout 5mins.....feedback is needed
I have my good days and I also have my bad days And now all I know is that life works in mysterious ways And as the sky over me greys, I take it all in my stride Coz no-matter what happens I know I will always survive Nothin will make me run and hide, fuck the tough times I've been through 'em and I portray 'em through my rhymes And in my mind I know that to my family I will never die Deep in there hearts my memory will be forever alive They've seen me cry and they've seen my joy and laughter So I know they'll always be with me now and forever after I'm learnin to think faster and not rely on somebody else Coz I know that it's up to me to get my own money and wealth And I'm in good health so I deliver this message to my family I thank you all, coz for 16years, you've looked out for me... |
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01-11-04, 05:25 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 8F11 D42F
i like the shit, good topic dawg cuz you gotta someone there wether its ya boys or ya fam, good rhymin, word scheme, everything dawg
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01-11-04, 05:26 PM
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Eye Designs
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IP: 156C 6588
Nice form of emotions
Good topic Good flow Good Structure Overall... dope peice Specially for a keystyle Props...Keep it up
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01-11-04, 05:45 PM
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Drop Of Genius
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Thanks for the comments
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01-11-04, 06:44 PM
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L.E
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IP: 5CC1 C246
Yo, this shit was dope...families these days are usually blamed for shit...but it is good to see someone give them praise for all the help...nice...
A'ight...structure was perfect...lines are almost exactly the same length...ryhmes are tite and used in a way that they stand out...vocab is nice...and the multis are tite... Keep up the work... 9/10 |
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01-12-04, 04:35 AM
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Drop Of Genius
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IP: 17AC 3451
OK Thanks....up
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01-12-04, 08:18 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 4013 53EF
when i clicked on your link i must admit to thinking of seeing some wack peice, but it was good, good flow, good vocab, good peice
the only thing i can say is dont put "keystyle" in on the heading it deters most people from reading it.
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Soft focus Whats the point of living? The voices in my head Feat. Rule Unlikely Alias More Comming soon! |
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01-12-04, 05:35 PM
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Drop Of Genius
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IP: CC43 900C
up
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01-12-04, 06:29 PM
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1E
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
i thought this was a good piece.... normally key's aint too good... but this was on point all thru.... quite a basic scheme... but carried well.... and nice topic....pZ
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01-13-04, 02:07 PM
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Drop Of Genius
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IP: 8EE0 0A5F
^^Thanks....uppin
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01-13-04, 02:48 PM
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
honestly....this board startin to seem fishy...i realizin ppl just kissin ass 2 other ppl so they'll peep their drops n shit....y ppl sayin "shit was dope" when it aint? every single post i seen (even the wackest of all 1's) ppl sayin it was still dope...u cats need 2 be 4real
this wasnt bad tho....only prob wit it....it lacked some form of creativity, content was good...flow was simple n nice tho.....wudnt say it is dope....but a good drop.... 1 |
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