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Old 01-08-04, 07:36 PM   #1
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"Hate Me Now"... ft. R-iZZy (OIS Diss)

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Peep it... it's the only one I got on there at the moment, close to my 5th audio. Any feedback is appreciated...

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Old 01-08-04, 07:42 PM   #2
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ok.. i got this beat..... its coo.... quality is not to good..... you have no presence or emotion.. dont know why you said the rock....
ya lyrics is coo. ya flow is on point.. you gotta work on emotion.
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Old 01-08-04, 07:51 PM   #3
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yeah, i know.. ehh.. the whole roc thing is a long story... i'll explain lata
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Old 01-08-04, 07:52 PM   #4
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but much appreciated feedback..
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Old 01-08-04, 08:41 PM   #5
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shits aite..whos all on that shit..

shits not half bad....a bit choppy but sum nice lyrics an shit..

nice huk.........



shits pretty good ..can get sum better vocals..sum kid sounded like a bitch on the part of his NOWwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Old 01-08-04, 08:43 PM   #6
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lmfao.. I know... I did the Noooowwwwwww part... haha... shoulda neva did it, but thanx g.. it's just me and izzy, I got 1st and 2nd verse, he got the third... comin out wit a new track soon, tryna take some advice and make it hot for yall... it should be...
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Old 01-12-04, 12:53 AM   #7
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Old 01-13-04, 01:38 AM   #8
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The first verse was fuckin bannanas. the rest was good too but the first was crazy ill. yeah it was a little choppy but it was good for the most part.

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Old 01-13-04, 09:13 AM   #9
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EDIT--- ok, since u did reply i wont close...

track is of, i don't see how it featuring ne-one.... but yo, your flow is a bit off most the time, lyrics is cool, u got sum hard hittin' punches... like the asshole/filled the part line, right at the start i know but it was dope, i like the marvin the martian set up too... delivery is coo... i guess, emotion is there, it jus' u need to be on beat better... 1
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Old 01-13-04, 11:50 AM   #10
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Old 01-13-04, 12:17 PM   #11
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i edited above with a reply...... peep my track...

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Old 01-13-04, 12:35 PM   #12
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no doubt.. i'll have to peep when I get home... i'm at school.. peace
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Old 01-13-04, 12:39 PM   #13
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and oh yeah... the song I did over the "Poppin Them Thangs" (freestyle diss) isn't featuring anyone.. you got the songs mixed up... peace
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Old 01-13-04, 10:40 PM   #14
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