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if your not voting do not post here...

all that should be here is...

Checks (Me & Weezy)
Verses ( Me & Weezy)
Ups (Me & Weezy)
Votes (Members with more then 500 posts)

chackin in cuzzo............................................. ...............................................
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WEEZY SNYPZ

in................................................ .(well at least it's only 50 characters now lol)

Listen .....only time you get pussy when you pettin' your cat/
the whole world is you stage...and you gettin your claps/


You like the town "get on"err body get on you/
and you gotta be a diaper evens babies shittin on you/

you got punchlines but they all cummin outta your ass/
you type 'shit"!!! drop it like a man wits no hands usin' his glass/

...You the def of pethetic...you need a medic victimize //
cuz im sick contageous flow jus spreadin'/

where you claimin at toront go back bitch is in last/
breathe stink like you rhymes he changed the tik wit the tak/

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WEEZY SNYPZ

You say your not where I'm from?...ight dawg chill....
Cuz I agree fully wit you...seeing that my Origin's Ill!....
And what's up with Weezy? Clear ya throat star....
Even if you flipped my name, you couldn't eat these bars!...(kitkat)
I dont even need ten, cuz I already killed him with these....
Kill wit vowels...rip him a new "A" and Kill "U" wit "E"'s...(ease)

ai that was nice yo you ate me up them last bars cuzzo................but can we still get sum votes please

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WEEZY SNYPZ

lmao at tak tik for explaining his punches...come on now

anyway tak tik wins for having displayed better punches
weezy did not hit nearly as hard with all ten of his lines
nice attempt though.....sorry

better flow more consistant

yup

"gimme a break"

kitkat bar!

tak tik killed this shit even thou it was sorter but thou last 2 bars were hard as hell and were ill... nice spit man

weezy wearnt bad eather but tak took you....

vote taktik

vote please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...14&page=1&pp=15

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One sided battle............

Taktik.. had tha punches....wordplay...and flow....Weezy was just had a bunch of bullshit
...he came with a weak played verse...Tak was creative...tha kitkat line....nice

so

v/Taktik

hit this up witha vote... being slept on....thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106705

Breakdown:

punches - taktic
personals - none
flow - taktic
creativity - taktic
opener - taktic
closer - taktic

OVERALL - taktic

Hit this up please taktic since you have over 100posts:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525

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In Respect

Yo I explained cuz it was my FL tendencies from back in the day when I was a newb lol, felt I'd try it again....anyways UPPIN!

ok ok
tak knows who i am...
dont feel like signing on as my other name
just to vote on this...

anyway...
weezy..right off the bat your verse just looked very newbish and played
lines were not even...and the " / " at the end of the lines is played also..
lose'em u dont need'em...
punches didnt really hit...and some didnt make sense..
nice try though...give you props for showing for the fight...
taktik is one of the best on the site...so dont take it to heart..

taktik...short but sweet...
liked the creativity on that last bar the most...it was funny and original
only needed six lines to take this with ease...
flow and structure was your normal..
therefore

v/taktik

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dam it really wouldnt let me post my vote cus i didnt have 500 post...
another perk of the new format i guess...


explanation left in the thread above....^

[i]very nice!!!....this is one of the best battles i read today...
Weezy
Listen .....only time you get pussy when you pettin' your cat/
the whole world is you stage...and you gettin your claps/
^^^nice but a played line.....


You like the town "get on"err body get on you/
and you gotta be a diaper evens babies shittin on you/
^^^not bad i think you tried to pull off a punch but it didnt go smooth

Taktik
And what's up with Weezy? Clear ya throat star....
Even if you flipped my name, you couldn't eat these bars!...(kitkat)
^^^clever word play

I dont even need ten, cuz I already killed him with these....
Kill wit vowels...rip him a new "A" and Kill "U" wit "E"'s...(ease)
^^^tight here too....



You say your not where I'm from?...ight dawg chill....
Cuz I agree fully wit you...seeing that my Origin's Ill!....
^^^yeah i understood that one...good flip....

Punches: Tie
wordplay:Taktic
flow & rhyme scheme: taktik

Vote: Taktik

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