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01-14-04, 04:16 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Yeah read this shit
IP: DC84 4CE0
clown just don't understand, raps not a game,
you in this for life, not just some shit, not just a phase, its about ways, how people do things, how we live, how we eat, how we crave, how we play, till the grave, till the end, we sleep, do it again, to the playas, to the hustlers, the our enemies, to friends, through easy, through rough, through birth and through grim, we rough and we rugged, no jail or no pin, plenty pain, plent strain, and no one to lend, me a bag, day is bad, how i cope, with this shit, burn some dro, some kb, some reg with my click, get lost and don't worry about problems and shit, fuck a bitch, fuck a hoe, fuck a slut and a trick, they all for nuts cuz they head is all gone, can't a girl like somethin diffrent than money and all, fame and fortunes not for them, they can blow balls, i wish they would choke and all die tommorow, but the'll be here forever like haters gonna hate, irate, and pissed off, cuz they welfare is late, BITCH GET A FUCKIN JOB!!!!!!!! Viscocity Word Perfect A.I. Last edited by CrackaBox187 : 01-15-04 at 02:00 PM. |
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01-14-04, 04:20 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: CCBC 2938
Think this wud be agood audio,sorta gangsta Ludacris typa ish right here,afew multies and pretty good flow.Not bad.
Hit mine up if you can man. Peace |
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01-15-04, 02:01 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: DC84 4CE0
uppin
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01-15-04, 04:25 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 6FDC 23CB
Yeah this was alright....probably would sound better in audio....you had some alright flow in this piece, it stayed on through out the piece, never really got off....had some alright vocab, could have been up'd though....had some alright multies as well...overall a alright piece....keep at it.
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