aiight
10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
no crew voting an all that shit!!!

spit your shit, an good look!!!

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Checking In..........................

yeh man no worries..... but more than 10 lines if we want.... is that oright

yeh, i will try an match you............................................... ...................................

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Check it out before you read my verse
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=100875


let the humilation begin- this kid looks like some1 from Bready Bunch
puts on a hard act on RB, but lets mommy pack his school lunch
I check out you tried Audio, but where you going - its not for you
Text battling is the number 1 thing ur wack at, Audio is number 2
Your rhyming methods are going nowhere - on RB your a pest
Shouldnt have ever registered - just looked round as a Guest
this shit aint complicated... but its puzzling -you think you can beat me
Judging by your arrogance, if you were blind, youd claim u can see
B4 anyone votes, heres some feedback:
........ Its not your determination its talent that you lack.........
Even If your using pre-writtens- your verses still end up wack
You try hard, so i feel bad for making you look so stupid
Understand you couldnt make people like your verses - if you were Qupid
I tried to be nice, But that pic speaks for itself...
You dont look like Santa- you resemble an ugly elf


ok man... spit within 20 min
peace

my fists of fury, hittin you with punches a-plenty,
your a step down from born to kill, at the age of 20,*
im 'clockin' this new age 'grandfather' of rap,
your like a wire, as soon as heat near you, ya snap,
even deaf, and armless peeps give you the slow clap,
you try to cover it up, but like rap, you can't act.
this kid a no-body, what personals could i use,
give future battlers one, after he tooken 007s abuse.
i spit in future tense, whilst you rappin bout the past,
like bricks a window, one of us is gettin smashed....
an i can see right through you**......
a terrible waste of life, you as unwanted as the clap!!!

*Born to Kill, well known on the site, he pretty old, an EKI is twenty!!
**the window line, i can see through you = metaphor!!!

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In Respect

punches - eki more real
personals - double O, had more ground
flow - Double O, easier to read
creativity - Double, nice meta
Original - None, nothin original

I DUnno jus felt Double O's verse more, Eki wasn't wack or anyting jus lacked a certain something.

iight...

as im in same crew as double-0 seven... im not gona vote... but im gona take that time and give you both some feedback...

Eki... nice structure... and a tight flow... some good punches about him doing audio... they were good... liked them... best line was...

'I check out you tried Audio, but where you going - its not for you
Text battling is the number 1 thing ur wack at, Audio is number 2'

very good... creative aswell... some other nice punches... some complexity... good overall verse... props to ya...

double-0 seven... you structure and flow were tight... very good... had some good punches... liked the shit bout the future n all that... best line...

'this kid a no-body, what personals could i use,
give future battlers one, after he tooken 007s abuse.'

haha... creative man... very good...

im not gona vote... so im not gona sway the voting either...

both tight verses... and this is gona be close... or it should be... unless the d/r start to vote... then someone is gona get screwed...

keep up both if ya...

OUT

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Multis-Eki
Personals-Tie
Flow-Eki
Punches-Tie
Meta-Eki

..I thought this was a very good battle..but..Eki came ahead by a hair...peace..

~Go Vote~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104404

punches - ek
personals - tie
flow - ek
opener - ek
closer - ek

ovarall - eki......good battle,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107036 vote in my battle and please return my favor

uppin
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