I'm gonna just key this now.....just made up the title......so i'm gonna go with it DONT SLEEP..leave a link and i'll hit ur's up....thanX!

What is it about life that keeps everyone going?
When asked, lateley the wrong things are showing
See each of our lives are more precious than light
Still we have to let out the agression and fight
Bottlin' up your emotions only hurts you more
So exhile them out and lay someone's head on a floor
Dont take a soul though ... that's the cardinal sin
But some cant stop ... say it's "to hard to defend"
When look at the world continuously turning and turning
It's the repedative occurances yearning for learning
See theres certain events and actions that take place,
That can be stopped, for us it's possible to change fate
Why eat off a deranged plate?, you could save grace
Instead with your grave face you choose to pledge waste
This is not in my room ... iv'e been around the edge paced
With red face, frustrated, that I live inside my own head case
Cause,
People are shot, people are killed
How do we stop ... whats already still?
How do we drop ... whats already spillt?
How do we Hot! ... whats already ILLed?
Hopin' the pot ... be givin' you skill?
You smokin' a lot ... not livin' in will ...
So I hope this is Givin' you chills
How can I not try to be real?
When,
People are shot, people are killed
I don't really know what to expect each every morning
One day it could be you dead and family in heavy mourning
Thta what you dont realize when you smokin that blunt
Or when you aint got a condom but you still fuckin that cunt
You wanna catch Aids? you better protect yuorself 4 real
As well as bullet shaves them shits'll hit you like steel
Your body can only take so much punishment, no joke
For those who dont acknowledge that ...well... they croak
The exsistence we know is some serious shit
...... I still smoke, drink and get delerious kid
But dont do it every day ... or you'll learn like I smoked
I been sick for 2 months and wanna BURN my own throat
So earn your own coat .... and make the paint thick
Churn your own quote ..... and make the sain sick
You got one chance at life so make sure it counts
Don't blow it tryna make $$ on that half an ounce
Theres higher things you should be concerned with
Like abortion clinic's lettin women Return Kids
Cause,
People are shot, people are killed
How do we stop ... whats already still?
How do we drop ... whats already spillt?
How do we Hot! ... whats already ILLed?
Hopin' the pot ... be givin' you skill?
You smokin' a lot ... not livin' in will ...
So I hope this is Givin' you chills
How can I not try to be real?
When,
People are shot, people are killed


keeeeeeeeezzzzzyyyyyyyy for sheeeeeezzzzzzzzyyyyyy

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Dope Shit dawg.......I really Got into it...............Tight Vocab...Wordplay and Flow.....Great piece overall

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Yo Man I Like reading Ya Stuff and shit..i enjoyed this Like most of the Others Ya have got nice Structure and Real Nice FLow And I think Ya have good skill in open mics..you normally have good well worked topics......so all and all Thi was a Decent Read Keep it droping Man....PeacE....

thanx.
uppn

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no doubt a good piece.... there was the middle wich had me going...all the multies were a good usage.....good drop...

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stop sleepin..........uppn........this

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i liked this piece a lot...it's good to see that you can write some nice shit aside from battling...definitely feelin it..good job tech...i like the way you approached your topic, written very nicely

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hot open mic' props....very nice keep it up *1*