I walk in a room and hear views and opinions,
hated upon so i walk with a vengance,
pissed off and ornary so i kill the first 2 kids,
after that the rest just went flewent,
rappin the battles, but battles not rap,
expect what happens when you bust i bust back,
respects on the line and believe i gets mine,
time after time, drowned in fluid from rhyme,
crimes commited from the drop of a dime,
droppin a line for my time to shine,
shinin on top with respect but much shit,
haters can rot and just blow on a dick,
this tables gonna topple, your body be droppin,
shots'll be poppin, and elbows be clockin,
cops'll be commin, ya faggots be runnin,
hit the back of your spine, out your stomach,
cops'll be next, off they helmet in neck,
next is the techs with cop killer bullets,
clip after clip, to show that we run it,
off of a battle, you didn't see it commin'

Comments Please!!!!!!

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..Just Quit..You can do it~~~~

You need to elevate dogg

i agree you need to work on it man... first thing is make sure it rhymes good... and make it more complex, with some decent vocab and a some decent mutls and wordplay... and think of good topics.... jus work on it.....