Existing in a world of I, O, U’s and a new set of rules
Where money is transferred and not spent… are you confused
It was rent and bills and food, hand-to-hand and well used
Now its moved and abused, through plastic cards flexing
Infecting unsuspecting people, letter after letter requesting
Well… letting, making the choice very easy to apply in name
10 minutes of ya life to fill in, bout 10 years of pain… repaying
Its insane, but whose to blame, its you who holds the shame
Or those who Spam the fucking mail, the fat cats that inevitably prevail
Impaling like a nail into the pocket of the unsuspecting victim
Today a house that’s lived in, tomorrow debt collectors… insisting
For the TV the DVD the PC anything else… oh. Then to the kitchen
So Basically anything worth lifting, inflicting a shell of your former self
An empty house from a former wealth, so what else could go wrong?
Then 1 forgotten bill sets the alarm, shit… an eviction notice that’s due on…
Fuck… the house is gone, so now ya homeless and what for
Cos ya didn’t read the small print, before, signing away ya front door
With HP, credit, debit, and much more, the incessant spending
That’s obtained easier with others lending, quickly spirals, before you fall
It’s just too easy to acquire if you desire with its persistent call
Advertised like it was a free complimentary gift… that fucks us all!

dope piece, i felt what u were sayin, i have accepted this problem in our society.. many companies now go for unsuspectin wallets, take banks for example: you overdraw your checking account by one cent, the bank will be glad to make up the difference for you. But this has just turned into a loan.. or rather a "service charge" and can charge ya like 20 bucks for that one cent that you overdrew.. now thats fucked up.. good piece tho flowed well, structure ws nice, good topic.
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nice piece man really liked this keystyle....i have seen a bit betta than this but it was still good....ya flow was a good part of this very Consistant Like always....ya structure was good....I think ya had nice vocab on this i liked that alot man...good imagery in this really could picture what u u saying....so all an all this was really good i enjoyed this read...Keep em Droping Man
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..Bastard..another dope piece...I'm wating for you to write a shitty piece(like that kid from yesterday name was:blingding???')..as aways it was a joyful read..

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he was whack....lol

..that kid was mad ill...literally ill....