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Old 01-21-04, 07:52 PM   #1
Spike Sanders
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Double S Is Back On Some Battle Type Shit

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Aight lets get it carackin.
I been gone for a minute but im back an still reppin the illest crew.
NUCLEAR CONCEPTS!!!!!!!


Yo, yo aight check it-
Ballistic missles hit you and carry you to the battle ground/
Then my lyrics drop on ya ass like a mortar round/
I split in two using cellular mitosis/
Now you got twice the killer attacking you like locust/
Im the cerebral assassin/
G-Force like a cannon/
You start to piss me off/
An I'll transform like Bruce Bannon/
You went from challenger to innocent bystander/
Caught in the crossfire of a rap game commander/
Gotta step up my game using stellar octane/
mixed wit Y J Stinger, energy level increase to the strength of a cosmic meter/
Wearin a wife beater, the glock ell give you dots like a cheetah/
When th hallow tips strike you hit the air like you suddenly lost gravity/
By the time you hit the ground you be the nations worst casualty/
Comparing our status would give you agoraphobia/
Meaning we so far apart its like tryin to find utopia/
I got the AFT after me for my hyper-text/
Now im into hyper- techs thatll shatter ya quadro-plex/
Basically im a rap monopoly wit too many faces to cover the earths races/
And you just lyrical virus on all these rap pages/
Ill huntcha and eatcha like on jeepers creepers/
And ill be sure to leave sumpthin when the angel comes to reap ya/
No need to watch the teacher the lessons almost over/
Like ya carrier on x-files as if you was molder.
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.
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Old 01-21-04, 08:23 PM   #2
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Good piece, had some nice word play and multies okie flow. seemed to work nicely with the way you brought the topic about. well done...some creative aspects as well..

Does your crew have a crew forum?

if you got time can you leave some feed back on my piece.
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Old 01-22-04, 04:02 PM   #3
Spike Sanders
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uppin^^^^^^^^^^
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.
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Old 01-22-04, 09:27 PM   #4
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yep yep boi... nice to see you back on dis peice... kinda thought u went ghost... i did for a min... but i'm backin normal form... bout to start droppin ish... this peice was madd nice dunny... wordplay multis... all niceness... thats what i likes to see... keep killin it dunny...

Caesar On3
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Old 01-22-04, 09:58 PM   #5
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Yo Thx For The Feedback Md. I;ll Be Sure To Hit Ya Shit My Nigga.
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Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.
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Old 01-23-04, 06:48 AM   #6
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yeh i liked this piece good flow and structure
and you used a good range of vocab
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