iight...

a called him out...

he accepted...

10 Lines
10 Minutes to spit after both have checked in...
No Crew
No Hate
No D/R

Good luck dawg...

this is my checkin... waitin on yours... then we got 10 mins... Pz

10 minutes blows don't be a bitch if its a little off i don't got a fuckin timer....checkin....peace....

no problem dawg... a lil bit either way dont matter to me... battlin is the main point...

good luck...

keying now...

Pz

Originality... thats a concept thats unknown to you
You use played out lines... AND your a bitch ass too
Apparently accordin to your avvy, 'They still dont know'
We know you no-show, and eat the yellow bits of snow
You hear your name in a lyric, and you tell me your rated
Well, the bit with your name in is where your gettin slated
Your truly livin up to your sig, you really are a joker
Your even more stupid than a blind man playin poker
How can you be 'UnderRated' when you are called wack
You cant win cuz the only way to beat me...
... is if you use a computer hack

I saw this new crew was set up in a instant with Cars, K and LM, damn they down to win it...
oh shit wait a minute they let freeman up in it kids got spirit but he don't quite get it..
THe only way your rock the flames you claim to spit is when i douse in gasoline..
cause the frame don't match the brain i spit abstract rhymes that hit your avy w/ a black light beam...
Seriously i know you don't understand my shit and i hate u for your confusions...
I tried to help this kid get sick but AOL doesn't allow internet blood transfusions..
Crushin this kid with my lyrical fitness freeman just got his win cloumn into double digits..
how did you get in this tell your crew who ever assigened this to you i'll battle any cat with .:ksdkls:. in an instant...
these last lines i designed just for you there personalized kids lookin kinda scetchy i think..
cause he's robber with his gear all tight but he rockin a bandana mask...and its pink?

nice battle lets get some votes see what the general public think....

still lookin for A vote let alone many votes that could close this battle thread....<----waynes world.....

Weak verse from freeman..
Sarted out with no punches
And tha punches you had were played(Joker,hack)
you had flow.. but thats it.. and structure

Under's verse was nice with punches that were creative
And that hit hard.. lines a lil stretched.. but you a rhyme in tha middle of em
Wordplay was there

so

V/ Under

Originality... thats a concept thats unknown to you
You use played out lines... AND your a bitch ass too
no offense but this reminded me of....
Roses are red violets are blue......lol...im funny
I saw this new crew was set up in a instant with Cars, K and LM, damn they down to win it...
oh shit wait a minute they let freeman up in it kids got spirit but he don't quite get it..
ha ha.....I'm so popular....nice personal but not tru
ne ways....
punches Under
flo Under
structure Freeman
personals Freeman
meti4's Under
multi's Under

overall Under...
Despite that false opener, he takes this simply cus he had sum killer flo and witty punches...freeman does take the personals, but they werent that good..and his ryhme scheme was quite predictable...

vote Under

uppin this for the second time or third i onno either way guys lets get some votes on this it still gotta close....what goes up must come down....drop your links...i'll do what i can peace....

UnderRated had some nice punches and a lot of personals. But his lines were stretched and that fucked the flow. Freeman had the flow but his verse wasn't that hard. Vote: Under

Link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109347 Please drop an honest one here

ayt good battle but underated ur lines were 2 long dawg but ur punches hit hard, with that saying freeman had good punches 2 and a structure but i give this vote 2 underated cause his punches hit a lil harder!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109267

Not bad, not bad.. Freemna dawg iv seen u come much iller than this.. but it was keyed quick so props fo that.. i felt u were a bit simple an that opener was kinda nursery rhyme style.. havin said that ur 4th line use of multis upped the tempo a bit but u kinda fell off again.. not ur best verse basically but not bad.. Underrated set the tone wiv that opener.. witty an funny.. punches were consistant but the flow was a lil choppy at times.. but u came stronger an more original throughout an had a coupla quotables.. nice verse for a quick key..

VoTe = Underrated

Drop ur vote here plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108710

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