"Death Cries"

[Verse 1]
A family disagreement, offspring becomes vehement
She's no longer content and makes her final descent
Parents say nothing's wrong, thinkin' it won't last long
So they continue on, not knowin' what's to come upon
A product of the street, sayin' she can take the heat
Life will soon deplete, body and soul will soon discrete
Offered a place to stay and she accepts without delay
Starts to dwindle away but says she's havin' a bad day
Once arrivin' at his place, wraps his hand over her face
Her mind starts to race and her heart slows its pace
The body drops to the floor, what did he do this for?
He runs to the door, knowin' what it is that he's in for
The cops found her dead and as the news spread
Her parents turned red. . .and then their tears shed

[Chorus x2]
Death Cries
People fail to realize
Life don't last forever
Say your goodbyes

[Verse 2]
Priorities were a mess, mom at the bottom of his list
Never even knew she exist, his whole thinkin' in a twist
Busy wit' somethin' to do, it's more important in his view
Like gettin' another tattoo or smokin' weed wit' his crew
As time passed she became ill, her health goin' downhill
On 10 pain-kill pills but her son never came around still
It hurt her even more, even worse than it had before
Didn't know why he'd ignore or have no sympathy for her
Things eventually got worse, was in the care of a nurse
Under her tears she submerged, whole life went adverse
He realised he was bein' cruel and drove to the hospital
Thinking about what he'd do and what he would say too
Along with a flower bouquet he went quickly on his way
But he picked a bad day. . .his mother had passed away

[Chorus x2]
Death Cries
People fail to realize
Life don't last forever
Say your goodbyes

[Verse 3]
You all need to get the message that is comin' across
Life is like a puzzle piece, it's no good after it's lost
Once someone is gone then there'aint no coming back
And when it does happen it's like an everlastin' attack
Can wipe the tears from your eyes and hold them within
Feels like you cried so much you could drown an ocean
It's a tough situation to have to deal with first hand
Could of ended differently but you didn't understand
That time is of the essence and you threw it all away
And now physically, mentally and emotionally you pay
It's over, you can't turn back the hands of the clock
Death's like the ultimate security wit' no key to unlock
You miss who is gone and now want to be by their side
But the only way to get there. . .is by commitin' suicide

[Chorus x2]
Death Cries
People fail to realize
Life don't last forever
Say your goodbyes

..Decent flow..decent rhyme scheme..your imagery was okay..nothing special..this was an average drop..peace..