I really liked this piece. I agree with Filed on why others might not really understand and feel the emotion in this piece. And i also think abstract and mysterious pieces are sometimes among the best. I personally like something that makes me think, something brought in a way not many bring it. But anywho.....
This piece was nice. The vocab, flow, structure, was right. I felt the concept, the thought behind this piece is.... really good (kind of lost for words). But this was a nice read, keep writing hun.

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."